The Christmas lights.
The special night when they turn on the lights7 total reviews
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I love Christmas lights, but I love how you're celebrating t he process of getting the lights in view. The countdown ends conversation/the lights flash on ... cheers and elation. Woo hoo!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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I love Christmas lights, but I love how you're celebrating t he process of getting the lights in view. The countdown ends conversation/the lights flash on ... cheers and elation. Woo hoo!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
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Many thanke Darlene.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is a creative and very well thought out way to describe the turning on of the Christmas lights. I like the sense of anticipation you've created with your well placed wording. Thanks for sharing this well written offering. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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This is a creative and very well thought out way to describe the turning on of the Christmas lights. I like the sense of anticipation you've created with your well placed wording. Thanks for sharing this well written offering. Well done!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Thanks Jeffrey
Comment from RodG
Yes, this is always a wonderful occasion at the White House or in the city's plaza every year (and usually well before Christmas). Your rhymes are well chosen and we get a vivid picture of the celebration.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Yes, this is always a wonderful occasion at the White House or in the city's plaza every year (and usually well before Christmas). Your rhymes are well chosen and we get a vivid picture of the celebration.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Many thanks Rod
Comment from kiwisteveh
Wise choice of rhyming sound with many possibilities for 'matches'
Yikes, Christmas is rushing upon us and there's so much to do, including getting all those Christmas light out from their storage place. Actually, we have already bought more lights for this year's illumination.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Wise choice of rhyming sound with many possibilities for 'matches'
Yikes, Christmas is rushing upon us and there's so much to do, including getting all those Christmas light out from their storage place. Actually, we have already bought more lights for this year's illumination.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Celebration of Christmas is no wishful act or action, when celebrated by heart one can notice how lights can change and evolve one's heart; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Celebration of Christmas is no wishful act or action, when celebrated by heart one can notice how lights can change and evolve one's heart; well said, well done.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Mono-Rhyme contest.
Your verse is smooth and clear while following the rhyming pattern.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Mono-Rhyme contest.
Your verse is smooth and clear while following the rhyming pattern.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Susan X Smith
I do like this engaging poem. It is an excellent contest entry since it contains only monorhymes. The content and the picture go well together and the message is so cheerful.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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I do like this engaging poem. It is an excellent contest entry since it contains only monorhymes. The content and the picture go well together and the message is so cheerful.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Many thanks Susan. X
