Cornucopias
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Comment from Susan X Smith
This little poem is a potentially successful contest entry. The words flow nicely in a free verse style to convey a simple message. The picture is a very nice addition.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
This little poem is a potentially successful contest entry. The words flow nicely in a free verse style to convey a simple message. The picture is a very nice addition.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Thank you. Happy Veterans Weekend :)
Comment from RodG
This is the perfect Thanksgiving prayer as the family gathers around the table savoring the scents of all that wonderful food. Indeed the "love will emanate" from each heart. Rod
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
This is the perfect Thanksgiving prayer as the family gathers around the table savoring the scents of all that wonderful food. Indeed the "love will emanate" from each heart. Rod
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Hi Rod! You're the best. Thank you
Happy Veterans Weekend :)
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My pleasure.
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is a lovely, gentle, inspirational poem, and the image you've chosen to accompany it completes a nice presentation {smiles}.
I particularly like the green background, it taps into the color of Mother Nature's bounty {thumbs up}.
I wish you the best of luck when the contest is judged {smiles}.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
This is a lovely, gentle, inspirational poem, and the image you've chosen to accompany it completes a nice presentation {smiles}.
I particularly like the green background, it taps into the color of Mother Nature's bounty {thumbs up}.
I wish you the best of luck when the contest is judged {smiles}.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Hi Alex! Thank you.
Happy Vetarans Weekend :)
Comment from country ranch writer
A way of saying thank you for the bounty you've received great job of working up this for your presentation for all of us. Beautiful.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
A way of saying thank you for the bounty you've received great job of working up this for your presentation for all of us. Beautiful.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Hi! Thank you.
Have a great weekend. Happy Friday :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This four-line poem Cornucopias, uses sixteen words to ge5 the holiday feelings going. We need to forget leaving NATO, climate agreements, abandoning UN positions and remember ourselves and loved ones.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
This four-line poem Cornucopias, uses sixteen words to ge5 the holiday feelings going. We need to forget leaving NATO, climate agreements, abandoning UN positions and remember ourselves and loved ones.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Hi Bill! You get sloshed on spiked mocktails and have debated conversations at holiday gatherings. I'm sure of it. Behave yourself this year. You're very nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for more good wishes about Happy Thanksgiving. I enjoyed your focus on the "gift of plenty" and "love". Enjoy the special days leading up to this holiday and best wishes in the Four-Line Poem contest- Joan
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
Thank you for more good wishes about Happy Thanksgiving. I enjoyed your focus on the "gift of plenty" and "love". Enjoy the special days leading up to this holiday and best wishes in the Four-Line Poem contest- Joan
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Hi Joan! Cute poems are coming. Don't you worry. Thank you :)
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I always enjoy your "cute poems". More cheers- Joan
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written four-line poem. During the festive season everyone seems to have an abundance of everything and are joyful and happy the whole time.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
A very well-written four-line poem. During the festive season everyone seems to have an abundance of everything and are joyful and happy the whole time.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Hi Sandra! This is the merriment of the holidays. You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
What great words for the Thanksgiving Holiday! You call it a "gift" of "plenty." So often we don't take time to remember how plenty our blessings are. And festive times are enjoyed best when love is in the heart!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
What great words for the Thanksgiving Holiday! You call it a "gift" of "plenty." So often we don't take time to remember how plenty our blessings are. And festive times are enjoyed best when love is in the heart!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
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Hi! You're nice. Thank you.
God bless you :)
Comment from BeasPeas
Happy Thanksgiving back to you, Alicia. I think it will be here before we know it. You've used a nice theme and image. The gift of plenty is an excellent way to describe our gratitude. Marilyn
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
Happy Thanksgiving back to you, Alicia. I think it will be here before we know it. You've used a nice theme and image. The gift of plenty is an excellent way to describe our gratitude. Marilyn
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Hi Marylin! Thank you. Happy Thanksgiving :)
Comment from Mark D. R.
Your cornucopia is a good title for your contest entry. Your selected FanArt artwork is a nice match to your four lines.
The following does not affect my review or rating, but since you use a comma and a period for your poem, consider changing the first letter of the last three lines to lowercase. Regardless, it is your poetic style to capitalize the first words.
Early wishes for a bountiful Thanksgiving to you too.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
Your cornucopia is a good title for your contest entry. Your selected FanArt artwork is a nice match to your four lines.
The following does not affect my review or rating, but since you use a comma and a period for your poem, consider changing the first letter of the last three lines to lowercase. Regardless, it is your poetic style to capitalize the first words.
Early wishes for a bountiful Thanksgiving to you too.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Hi Mark! You're nice. I appreciate the edit note. Thank you. Happy Thanksgiving :)