Top Billing
Headlining for the cold months...16 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
This perfectly penned senryu and beautifully directed "Pansy's Debut" of yours is effectively a sparkling autumnal broadway starring show throughout its singular pictured characterization and colourful-faced pansies. "Ladies and gentlemen, the show is on!" I am really sorry because I have no six stars left. Tony
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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This perfectly penned senryu and beautifully directed "Pansy's Debut" of yours is effectively a sparkling autumnal broadway starring show throughout its singular pictured characterization and colourful-faced pansies. "Ladies and gentlemen, the show is on!" I am really sorry because I have no six stars left. Tony
Comment Written 07-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Thanx, Tony, for such a wonderful review on this one.... Pansy are so much my favorite simply because they are bright, bright colors in the middle of the dull browns and leaflessness of Winter! ;) Take care and have a great weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from dragonpoet
What a colorful surrounding for the poem with the bright background and the artwork. This is perfect for the contest and shows how beautiful fall flowers can be. I wouldn't call it a bleak show. But I guess they are a sign that Winter is coming.
Congrats on placing third in the reviewing contest. Good luck in the 5 7 5 contest.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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What a colorful surrounding for the poem with the bright background and the artwork. This is perfect for the contest and shows how beautiful fall flowers can be. I wouldn't call it a bleak show. But I guess they are a sign that Winter is coming.
Congrats on placing third in the reviewing contest. Good luck in the 5 7 5 contest.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 04-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Joan -- always good to hear from you! :) YVette
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You are most kindly welcome, Yvette.
Joan
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your imagery is very vivid. For those who have never seen pansies they now know how bright and colorful they are. This is kind of a fun animation projected in this poem. It would make a cute video. Your use of personification enhances the mood of enchantment. Well expressed.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Your imagery is very vivid. For those who have never seen pansies they now know how bright and colorful they are. This is kind of a fun animation projected in this poem. It would make a cute video. Your use of personification enhances the mood of enchantment. Well expressed.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Thanx so much for stopping by on this one, Liz -- always good to hear from you! Tell Bea and company hello! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Ronni
Hi Yvette,
This gorgeous fall nostalgia and bright reminder and tribute
to the ever adorable and glorious pansy. Your pic alone
echo's a stage or screen director the perfect dynamic intro:
"Lights! Action! Camera!" and the pansies wordlessly, yet
glamorously take instant cue and just glow and glow with
daylight being the perfect Light! They're top billing stars indeed! Thanks for sharing this bright fall tonic served a la carte by
your ever witty, creative and uncompromised conceptions!
This was a delight treat indeed. Thanks for sharing dear (:;)
Best always, Ronni
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Hi Yvette,
This gorgeous fall nostalgia and bright reminder and tribute
to the ever adorable and glorious pansy. Your pic alone
echo's a stage or screen director the perfect dynamic intro:
"Lights! Action! Camera!" and the pansies wordlessly, yet
glamorously take instant cue and just glow and glow with
daylight being the perfect Light! They're top billing stars indeed! Thanks for sharing this bright fall tonic served a la carte by
your ever witty, creative and uncompromised conceptions!
This was a delight treat indeed. Thanks for sharing dear (:;)
Best always, Ronni
Comment Written 03-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your lively review for the Pansies' debut, my lady -- they are so very far and away my favorite winter flower because of all their color they have to lend to just about any setting or landscape.... their little faces just smile up at the camera and say: "look at me and smile"!! ;) :) Take care out there and, again, my apologies on the delay .... but now my grading is caught up and my lectures are done and the family issues are settled...for now! :) :) LOL! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a gorgeous display on a dreary fall day -
sweet pansy faces that cheer, come what may.
Mother Nature had plans that would cause much dismay,
but this poet paints words and sends snowflakes away.
Good luck in the contest with this delightful 5-7-5! Smashing presentation to adorn your poem, too!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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What a gorgeous display on a dreary fall day -
sweet pansy faces that cheer, come what may.
Mother Nature had plans that would cause much dismay,
but this poet paints words and sends snowflakes away.
Good luck in the contest with this delightful 5-7-5! Smashing presentation to adorn your poem, too!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Thanx for your review on this one, Lady Dawn -- hope all's well in the Great White North! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like the clever and colorful wording you've used in this. The artwork compliments your words and does put the reader on the set of a beautiful Broadway show. They are arrayed with splendor indeed! Thanks for sharing this well written offering. Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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I like the clever and colorful wording you've used in this. The artwork compliments your words and does put the reader on the set of a beautiful Broadway show. They are arrayed with splendor indeed! Thanks for sharing this well written offering. Well done!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Flower contest.
Your lovely verse matches the beautiful picture nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Flower contest.
Your lovely verse matches the beautiful picture nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a punchy and vibrant write filled with colour as these pansies show their colourful hues, I liked your metaphor for them, a broadway show with all its razzmatazz is included here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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This is a punchy and vibrant write filled with colour as these pansies show their colourful hues, I liked your metaphor for them, a broadway show with all its razzmatazz is included here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Oooooo... This is such a pretty flower entry. Love it, well done and best of luck in the contest. Happy Halloween! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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Oooooo... This is such a pretty flower entry. Love it, well done and best of luck in the contest. Happy Halloween! ~Kerry
Comment Written 31-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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Thank you!
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Welcome.
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Welcome.
Comment from juliaSjames
Nice metaphor in this bright poem. Pansies are appearing everywhere and the show goes on until spring. The optics are an excellent match for your poem. Best of luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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Nice metaphor in this bright poem. Pansies are appearing everywhere and the show goes on until spring. The optics are an excellent match for your poem. Best of luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 31-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2019
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Thank you.
