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Me and You 40+ years of Poems

Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "When Neglect Was Detected "
Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez

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Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi George. Your poetry is interesting. The habit of capitalization within is both distracting for the reader and illuminating as, you say, it may contain another message within the capped words. Marilyn

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
    Thank you for the continued support by taking the time to read and review my poetry. Continued Blessings to you.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Ahhhh, yes -- as a female, I can say (without condemnation, I would hope) that we do have a flair for the dramatic sometimes don't we? But, you know, you guys really are very helpful in that department...LOL! ;) What a fun offering for this contest -- perfect!! ;) :) Thanx so much for sharing the unspoken actions that lead to dissension... :) :) Yvette

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
    As usual I ran it by the boss for review. LOL
    Thank you for the review and compliments.
reply by Y. M. Roger on 29-Oct-2019
    Yes, sir! ;) :) :)
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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This is a well written poem in response to the Pix This challenge. This artwork has inspired many good poems, yours included, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
    Thank you for the review and positive encouraging support on this poem offering.