Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

I thought your use of Christmas to build a metaphor of snow for the addiction of heroin both innovative highly clever. This is well penned and a compelling reading experience. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019

Thanks and it was a joy to write and share.
Ricky

Comment from Lulube

Excellent

Interesting method of introducing all your characters. then having them all have a part in John's life, which was their betterment. Some people thrive on being there for those less fortunate than themselves, as long as they can afford it. They are just givers in life and there are always takers that pop up and no one else will help them.

lulube

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019

Thanks,
lulube!
Ricky

reply by Lulube on 28-Oct-2019

welcome

lulube

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Liking is not enough, love is everything for survival and giving security and safety for life, mercy is the greatest of all human qualities, but who cares, for personal wish fulfillment, we do and invite our own sorrows, prayer cannot solve, God justice goes for righteous action; well said, well done, good taletelling about the real life story of death and fate.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019

Thanks again and have a blessed day.
Ricky

Comment from tim dodd

Excellent

a lot of Christmas wishes her
whats a wa wa is that a store?
sounds familiar. When you first wrote vet
I was thinking veterinarian lol. I should have known
I am a vet also. Like these stories of hope with
the happy endings

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019

Wawa is a chain Luke 7-Eleven here in Jersey or Jiffy down South.
They specialize in Hoagies.
(Shorties)
Good but a little pricey.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024