Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL! Would sound a lot better than some of the nonsense the students use these days!! ;) Although it is late due to work/family, I wanted you to know how grateful I am that you joined our obscurity fun this time, Harry!! Take care and have a wonderful week! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019

Always a pleasure to dabble in obscurity. Thanks for the challenge.

Comment from Sallyo

Excellent

We still say that downunder... she'll be jake! Mind, it's the older generation that says it. Thanks for reminding me of a fine slang term. Just one thing: flapper's ought to be flappers.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019

Thanks for the read and the suggestion.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
and the use of one continuous
thought is effective.
-Good description and use
of the flapper's answer at the end.
-A small thing- you need asked
in line two.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019

Thanks for the read and the tip. I will edit.

reply by Pam (respa) on 27-Oct-2019

You are very welcome.

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

You certainly did find an obscure word, ideal for the contest. The poem is cute and the picture you chose is lovely and acts as a fitting complement to the words. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019

Thanks for the read and the comments.