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Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "The Twin Blue Spruce Topper!"A Book of Horror and Honor.
6 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful offering of a tree that became more despite its 'beautiful covering' being chopped off -- great use of that metaphor! ;) Thanx for sharing! :) :) Yvette :)
P.S. Sorry so far behind -- was a full past three days of family matters with the boys that needed tending to .... and now it's time to catch up with school! ;) :) Take care! ;)
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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A beautiful offering of a tree that became more despite its 'beautiful covering' being chopped off -- great use of that metaphor! ;) Thanx for sharing! :) :) Yvette :)
P.S. Sorry so far behind -- was a full past three days of family matters with the boys that needed tending to .... and now it's time to catch up with school! ;) :) Take care! ;)
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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No problem.
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
"The Bruce Spruxe?" (I don't understand this)
"What if I took one of the lower and larger branches and tie it up in the air?" (tied)
"For rhe many people that drive by." (the)
"So, I would place a ladder nearby ianf peer." (???)
Thanks again for sharing your story and emphasizing the value of organ donation. Take care, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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"The Bruce Spruxe?" (I don't understand this)
"What if I took one of the lower and larger branches and tie it up in the air?" (tied)
"For rhe many people that drive by." (the)
"So, I would place a ladder nearby ianf peer." (???)
Thanks again for sharing your story and emphasizing the value of organ donation. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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I'm terrible with Grammar and I don't bother with Spell check Why?
A lot of teachers here.
Anywho, fixed the two and have a great week.
Deb.
Ricky
And Snow White?
Awaits....
Comment from Lulube
A very honorable thing to do, for the better of the environment, a tribute for your son and for the peace within your soul. It's a survivor as well as you are.
great piece
lulube
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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A very honorable thing to do, for the better of the environment, a tribute for your son and for the peace within your soul. It's a survivor as well as you are.
great piece
lulube
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thanks luck and read "Cold As Ice!(B)
Jason's entrance to Heaven.
Ricky
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okay I'll look for it, you have so many, "i can't keep up with you
lulube
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This appears to be either an edit or an expansion of a previous post. Regardless, I still enjoyed it and found it to be a fine and engaging read. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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This appears to be either an edit or an expansion of a previous post. Regardless, I still enjoyed it and found it to be a fine and engaging read. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Yes,
A re-write and thanks.
Ricky
Comment from country ranch writer
Sorry to hear of your son passing. Like you kindly blue spruce fighting to live so is your sons organs get a new lease on life for a second chance to help others to live.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Sorry to hear of your son passing. Like you kindly blue spruce fighting to live so is your sons organs get a new lease on life for a second chance to help others to live.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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I'm sure, besides myself, Jason appreciatees it.
Ricky
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Smiles and burst wishes
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Smiles and best wishes
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Smiles and best wishes
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Smiles and best wishes
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
this is very strange. It is so short I can't find any trace of the story. Just the title and the beautiful photograph. I hope you will be able to fix whatever went wrong.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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this is very strange. It is so short I can't find any trace of the story. Just the title and the beautiful photograph. I hope you will be able to fix whatever went wrong.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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It's finished now my dear you must have caught it in the piiminary stage.
Ricky