"Beautiful!"
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "What Does Love Mean to Me"Poetry at it's finest.
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I didn't realize you had been in a serious accident as well, my friend. Was there brain damage from it? I have it and when I am tired or sick, it becomes very apparent~Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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I didn't realize you had been in a serious accident as well, my friend. Was there brain damage from it? I have it and when I am tired or sick, it becomes very apparent~Debbie
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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I've been run over riding bikes three times and yes I had brain damage and also a heart attack but there was no severity when it comes to the brain damage.
when I was run over to last time my leg was broken in six places so I have an 18in titanium rod in it.
Again I feel not a thing and I have no handicap.
a total motorcycles of 40,000 MKX when I fell asleep at the wheel and survived three suicides and I'm still walking this planet.
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from l.raven
Hi Ricky so good to see you sweet guy...I love can make you feel like you could reach out and touch heaven...most wonderful feeling in the world my sweet friend...and it can hurt worse than any pain you could ever feel...sigh...your poem is very well written...and I ssooooo love your picture...love your poem...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Hi Ricky so good to see you sweet guy...I love can make you feel like you could reach out and touch heaven...most wonderful feeling in the world my sweet friend...and it can hurt worse than any pain you could ever feel...sigh...your poem is very well written...and I ssooooo love your picture...love your poem...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Better than this?
"Cold As Ice! (B)
Get ready to Really Experience Heaven through the Eyes of Someone there!
RIcky....
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I am ready Risky...so many I want to see...and know I well...smiling big you...lovw xxoo
Comment from lyenochka
Hi Ricky,
Your poem reads like a list of song titles or first lines. I liked the internal rhymes in ""Love is fleeting yes, and defeating."
Thanks for your notes. Your son was too young to go. How generous to donate his organs. He lives on through the recipients.
"I'm dieing *Inside?" (dying?)
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Hi Ricky,
Your poem reads like a list of song titles or first lines. I liked the internal rhymes in ""Love is fleeting yes, and defeating."
Thanks for your notes. Your son was too young to go. How generous to donate his organs. He lives on through the recipients.
"I'm dieing *Inside?" (dying?)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thanks and I mix those two and lieing and lying up.
Ricky.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You express what love means to you in clear and simple terms that still manage to paint a lovely image of caring and lasting hope. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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You express what love means to you in clear and simple terms that still manage to paint a lovely image of caring and lasting hope. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Why thanks my dear
Catch...
"Cold As Ice!"(A)
And...
"Cold As Ice!"(B)
(Jason in Heaven)
Ricky
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"What Does Love Mean to Me", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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"What Does Love Mean to Me", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thanks Duchess and next?
"The Blue Spruce Twin Topper!
Ricky
Ricky 1024,
As always, you're more than welcome.
God bless and have a great weekend,
the Duchess :)))
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Thanks
When are we getting married.
I want a chance and change of scenery.
I can cook, dance, and write?
Ricky
You're more than welcome.
Name the date....
What more could a woman ask for?
the Duchess
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I got to ask the queen because I have a date with her first!
LOL!
Ricky
Well! I think I've just been put in my place. The queen of where?
LOL!
the Duchess
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Queen Elizabeth the LL.
She's got the Royal Jewelry.
Can you complete?
I need a wealthy woman!
King Ricky the First!
King Ricky, the First!
What you want and what you get, may NOT be the same thing....... :-)
Of course I can compete!!
Wealthy and drop dead gorgeous, are just what you need,
the Duchess
Comment from Raul1
A mix of poetry and Elvis Presley songs. It sounds like you're singing way through your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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A mix of poetry and Elvis Presley songs. It sounds like you're singing way through your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thanks Raul.
Elvis?
Had it all, gave it all, and lost it all.
Ricky
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You're welcome
Comment from Bichon
A very sweet and thoughtful poem, Ricky. The rhyming scheme was great and really flowed well. The photo is really adorable too, such a cute little ornament.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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A very sweet and thoughtful poem, Ricky. The rhyming scheme was great and really flowed well. The photo is really adorable too, such a cute little ornament.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thanks Bichon.
Ricky
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Are these words from an Elvis song Ricky? I liked your playful poem here about love and how fleeting and momentary it is, if we get a second chance we should always take it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Are these words from an Elvis song Ricky? I liked your playful poem here about love and how fleeting and momentary it is, if we get a second chance we should always take it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Yes for Elvis and Second Chance?
Thanks,
Ricky and Jason
Comment from Mary Ann McPhedran
Thank you for sharing your love poem. I found no errors, and the item kept my interest all to the end. There is no need for changes. I enjoyed reading the item. I like the imagery and the historyk
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thank you for sharing your love poem. I found no errors, and the item kept my interest all to the end. There is no need for changes. I enjoyed reading the item. I like the imagery and the historyk
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thanks Maryann for your time, comments and consideration.
Ricky and Jason
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A delightful little collection of 'love notions' accompanied by just a precious pic!! ;) Both can't help but make your reader smile!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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A delightful little collection of 'love notions' accompanied by just a precious pic!! ;) Both can't help but make your reader smile!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thanks Yvette.
Ricky and Jason