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Viewing comments for Chapter 130 "Run For Your Life."
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Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

In the past Kings were prompt to blame their queens if they didn't bare the hoped son , an heir to the throne .. HenryVIII lost interest in Anne Boleyn because she supposedly could not conceive a boy.


But now with our advanced technology we know that it's the male gene that determines the sex of the child .. Their sperm carries both the X and Y chromosome ...

so if the male Y chromosome reaches the XX chromosomes of the female first , the child will be a boy.

The artwork is cool and the topic different from the usually.

Boy or girl ? I say the main thing is that the newborn is healthy ..

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2019

Comment from Raul1
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I like how you structured this poem. Your poem is interesting and unique. I like this poem you wrote. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2019

Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Are these ghosts flying within the picture? If your picture is to do with Halloween, I will run for my life. But then the sun is smiling so it should be okay. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
    HELLO ROSEMARY: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. Ha ha ha...It made me LOL, to see that you being a woman didn't recognize the inkling of child conception in this posting. Or maybe it's just that I had a poor way to depict it by using a cartoon. I just did that to add a little humor to the matter. Your comments are appreciated, dear lady, God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.