Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 66 "A Love's Fire "Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Some wise advice here George, that burning desire of love can sometimes burn deep and cause trouble, we need to come up for air occasionally, I enjoyed your words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Some wise advice here George, that burning desire of love can sometimes burn deep and cause trouble, we need to come up for air occasionally, I enjoyed your words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you my Editor In Chief Approved it for release! LOL 🤣
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a beautiful poem about the fire of love in a relationship, my friend. I would spell out the number three, otherwise, it is quite lovely as is~Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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This is a beautiful poem about the fire of love in a relationship, my friend. I would spell out the number three, otherwise, it is quite lovely as is~Debbie
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the positive encouraging review, I had trouble with sentence length vs font size/ style for this poem's lenght attempt (2) Will revise soon.