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Mr. MBA vs. Admin Assistant

Two office icons in verbal smackdown!

4 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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CONGRATULATIONS on Second Place!! Oh, my goodness, don't these kind of folks just make you completely NUTS?!! ;) :) A hilarious offering for the contest -- I was hoping to get some really 'unique' ones and you came through with flying colors, Reese!! :) Thanx so much for joining the mayhem and have a wonderful weekend! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
    Great to hear from you, Ms. Roger! Thanks for the great prompt. It gave me a chance to remember why I never fit into corporate life and give thanks that I found other employment. Do another one like that so I can cover ?Tech Service? and ?HR?. May your weekend be fun and your teams all win! Regards, Reese
Comment from papa55mike
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Wow, what a contest. This poem is wonderfully written, and I love the picture. I've seen this situation too many times; the workers always suffer.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
    Thanks for the great review. Seems I stirred some memories for you. Now retired, I can look back at those Brooks Brothers days and laugh!
    (p.s. I will have a great day; my wife is dressing to leave for the day. Life is good!)
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Thanks for sharing this office spat in poetic form. But are they limericks? I didn't catch the flow of it. I am glad you escaped a situation of constant strife and infighting. Bill

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
    These be limerick, I do believe
    AABBA is the rhyme scheme conceived
    To bounce right along
    And swing like a song
    Honest, with no intent to deceive...

    Thanks for the nice review. Thanks for the alert, but I double checked and I do seem to be in compliance with rhyme and syllable count - which is flexible.
Comment from Ricky1024
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This Contest Entry was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
    But, did it make you laugh, at least smile? The purpose of my writing is to entertain. Thanks for the review.