You Need Slapped
Contest entry19 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
WOW! Now tell us what you REALLY think. LOL! This is such a hoot. It's skillfully-written and pull-no-punches. Also, the message is extremely clear. BRAVO!
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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WOW! Now tell us what you REALLY think. LOL! This is such a hoot. It's skillfully-written and pull-no-punches. Also, the message is extremely clear. BRAVO!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, Janice. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Perfect. These are very well composed limericks that deserve a good slap. The pictures are very substantially representative of your words and I would say you should rate in this contest. Well done!
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Perfect. These are very well composed limericks that deserve a good slap. The pictures are very substantially representative of your words and I would say you should rate in this contest. Well done!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Raffaelina. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. have a great day.
Comment from Reese Turner
Well, this little offering certainly brought back memories of corporate life for me. I never did fit in that well and your descriptions are spot on. Thanks!
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Well, this little offering certainly brought back memories of corporate life for me. I never did fit in that well and your descriptions are spot on. Thanks!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Reese. I was actually lucky enough to never have to deal with corporate life, but I could just imagine. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great day.
Comment from LyndaS
Ha! Ha! This is priceless. First of all, thank you for actually writing not one, but two perfectly formed limericks. Your phrasing and meter are spot on! Secondly, you have answered this prompt in spades with two dueling employees and their intense dislike of each other. And finally the formatting of this post rocks! These two pictures totally enhance what you've written about them and are funny as hell. GREAT JOB POET!!!! Lynda
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Ha! Ha! This is priceless. First of all, thank you for actually writing not one, but two perfectly formed limericks. Your phrasing and meter are spot on! Secondly, you have answered this prompt in spades with two dueling employees and their intense dislike of each other. And finally the formatting of this post rocks! These two pictures totally enhance what you've written about them and are funny as hell. GREAT JOB POET!!!! Lynda
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Wow, thank you so much for the awesome review and giant sixer, Lynda. Yeah , I always try to go with the rhythm of "There once was a man from Nantucket" whenever I attempt one of these limericks, so I'm somewhere close to meter. Lol. When I came across these pics I just had to use both of them. I couldn't resist. Haha. I really appreciate the gracious rating, Lynda. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a wonderful day and thank you again.
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Any thyme. lol I'll just add this to your account. We can square up later.
Comment from Nowhereman1
Very well written poem. I really enjoyed reading this. You followed the prompt perfectly and you made quite the funny and relatable poem. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Very well written poem. I really enjoyed reading this. You followed the prompt perfectly and you made quite the funny and relatable poem. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Wow, thank you for the fantastic review and the big sixer, Nowhere Man. I really appreciate the generous rating, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great day and thank you again.
Comment from Cindy Warren
This one gave me a smile. I think I'd like to slap both of them. One is a suck up and the other doesn't shower. Perhaps they're perfect for each other. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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This one gave me a smile. I think I'd like to slap both of them. One is a suck up and the other doesn't shower. Perhaps they're perfect for each other. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review, Cindy. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great day.
Comment from humpwhistle
Ah, two different voices, but both wind up at the same anatomical part.
Funny how people sometimes see others the same way others see them.
Well-written limericks.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Ah, two different voices, but both wind up at the same anatomical part.
Funny how people sometimes see others the same way others see them.
Well-written limericks.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Lee. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from LisaMay
So, which side of this limerick pairing is the autobiographical one?? You have definitely given an unfortunate situation an 'airing' in a pull-no-punches manner (or lack of manners). They are both well written, very much within the limerick tradition of grubbiness.
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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So, which side of this limerick pairing is the autobiographical one?? You have definitely given an unfortunate situation an 'airing' in a pull-no-punches manner (or lack of manners). They are both well written, very much within the limerick tradition of grubbiness.
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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I'm the one bitchin' about the stench. Lol. I drive a truck and sometimes I get in at night and it's clear that the guy before me doesn't keep up on his ass washing chores. Haha. Thank you for the great review and stars, Lisa. I'm glad you liked this dumb thing.
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Definitely unpleasant to be shut in a cab with a shitty stench.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent pair of limericks that appear to meet the contest
requirements nicely.
Very good contrast between the two while maintaining the theme
excellent rhymes, meter and syllables
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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You've written an excellent pair of limericks that appear to meet the contest
requirements nicely.
Very good contrast between the two while maintaining the theme
excellent rhymes, meter and syllables
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Robert. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
