You Need Slapped
Contest entry19 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
CONGRATULATIONS on Third Place!! Funny that we had a number of offerings that brought up smelly co-workers.... eeeewww!! ;) :) A hilarious offering for the contest -- I was hoping to get some really 'unique' ones and you came through with flying colors, Ron!! :) Thanx so much for joining the mayhem and have a wonderful weekend! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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CONGRATULATIONS on Third Place!! Funny that we had a number of offerings that brought up smelly co-workers.... eeeewww!! ;) :) A hilarious offering for the contest -- I was hoping to get some really 'unique' ones and you came through with flying colors, Ron!! :) Thanx so much for joining the mayhem and have a wonderful weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review and for throwing the contest, Yvette. I had fun with it. Have a great rest of your weekend as well. See you next time.
Ron
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
Laugh out loud funny, and it rings so true. The images and the thinking behind the words reflect many an office environment. Both limericks would stand on their own, but together, they are a powerhouse... ...ec
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Laugh out loud funny, and it rings so true. The images and the thinking behind the words reflect many an office environment. Both limericks would stand on their own, but together, they are a powerhouse... ...ec
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Elaine. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a great day.
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You're welcome - it was really great... ...ec
Comment from NickieT
I love the imagery that you have chosen to accompany this piece. It fits the prompt well both in form and in content. I appreciate the level of sass that is conveyed between both parties - clearly worthy of the limerick form.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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I love the imagery that you have chosen to accompany this piece. It fits the prompt well both in form and in content. I appreciate the level of sass that is conveyed between both parties - clearly worthy of the limerick form.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Nickie. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Now that is a limerick full of body parts from down under. I'm glad I didn't experience this personally. Thanks for sharing your unique wording including "skank."
Bill
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Now that is a limerick full of body parts from down under. I'm glad I didn't experience this personally. Thanks for sharing your unique wording including "skank."
Bill
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Bill. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm loving the rhythm here and you have the lewd content that makes the Limerick sing! Here we are talking about personal hygiene and I just loved your expressive and explicit language! You scored with this one, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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I'm loving the rhythm here and you have the lewd content that makes the Limerick sing! Here we are talking about personal hygiene and I just loved your expressive and explicit language! You scored with this one, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, Dolly.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent pair of limericks as the butt sniffer survives and succeeds, wonderful artwork to support this great read, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Excellent pair of limericks as the butt sniffer survives and succeeds, wonderful artwork to support this great read, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Kahpot. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written dual Limerick about the differences between people that we often feel overwhelming and we have to clear up now we feel about one another just to be sure they change whatever is wrong.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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A very well-written dual Limerick about the differences between people that we often feel overwhelming and we have to clear up now we feel about one another just to be sure they change whatever is wrong.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Sandra.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a technically sound Limerick with fluid meter and correct line and syllable count throughout. The count / counterpoint views of the situation were well executed. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a technically sound Limerick with fluid meter and correct line and syllable count throughout. The count / counterpoint views of the situation were well executed. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Mystic A. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from David R. Davis
That was a very thorough slapping. We've all had co-workers as you so well describe. Although a bit rough on the language, I very much appreciated your words. Thanks for sharing, enjoy your day and go well.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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That was a very thorough slapping. We've all had co-workers as you so well describe. Although a bit rough on the language, I very much appreciated your words. Thanks for sharing, enjoy your day and go well.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, David. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi there,
this is so funny. The second limerick reminds me of so many people I work with. Sometimes they are so obvious it makes me want to puke.
Thank you for the laugh.
Brenda.x
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Hi there,
this is so funny. The second limerick reminds me of so many people I work with. Sometimes they are so obvious it makes me want to puke.
Thank you for the laugh.
Brenda.x
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review, Brenda. I really appreciate the generous stars I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Have a great day.
