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Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Popcorn and Peanuts"
Children Stories from the Heart.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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Well, those Popcorns sure do sound like they have lots of duds in their family mix. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    I used up my posts today, so I'll probably finish this.
    Thanks,
    Ricky
Comment from brenda bickers
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Well Ricky,
that was short and sweet. I look forward to reading the second part of this story. You do amuse me with your imagination. Bless you.
Brenda.x

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    Thanks Brenda.
    I will continue this one on the Twenty Second.
    Now?
    "The Hollow One"
    Thanks,
    Ricky
Comment from Raul1
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You made me laugh the whole time the popcorn family popped up at the wrong places. Very funny! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    Thanks Raul.
    This will be continued a little later but for now?
    "The Hollow One'
    Ricky
reply by Raul1 on 22-Oct-2019
    You're welcome.
reply by Raul1 on 22-Oct-2019
    You're welcome.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019