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Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Never played the game but I was a caddy for 10 odd years .

The weirdest / nuttiest people play.


Even under the pouring rain they will take to the greens.

In that decade, I recall only once was a game interrupted due to thunder... and only for 15 minutes.

They played even if there was fog ,thick like milk , and then they expected that I saw where their tiny golf balls fell.

I like walking so while I did that as a caddy , I earned money .. Some were generous , other really stingy.

I used to be a caddy for an elderly man three times aweek .. no rush or hussle like on the weekend competitions.

All together I have fond memories of my time on the golf field.







 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
    HELLO TEMPESTE: It's time for me to thank you again...So...I will...Thank you, Tempeste. You are always appreciated. I'm just trying to imagine a girl caddy. Ha ha ha. At the links where I was a caddy there was none other than a bunch of, "hard heads," in the caddy house. Girls were not allowed. So rolling dice and lying about great adventures with girls was all that you did...'til you. "got out." WOW! A girl caddy in the caddy house. Mmmmmmm....cool with me. Thank you for sharing, dear lady. God bless you. CIAO, Tempeste. Cordially: rhonnie69,
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Good
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this clever thirteen-
word piece. I gave a four because I just can't see it as a horror poem. I tried to see it that way!

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019

Comment from gudbjorg
Excellent
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As an entry in the Horror Poetry contest, this certainly made me wonder. Was it the subject, the object or the theme that represents Horror here? It would be a great Humour entry but perhaps the horror is the thought of which balls are being hit here by one with a masterly powerful stroke! It certainly made me think! Well done!

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019