Reviews from

The forever revenge.

a flash fiction

2 total reviews 
Comment from Susan X Smith
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It is ironic that both sisters ended up together and neither one got the man, as it turned out. I do like the fact that Sarah felt remorse, although she certainly did get more than her share of revenge.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
    Thanks for the review Susan. One simple act of revenge can have forever ripples, yikes.
Comment from JLR
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Oh! such a poignant tale of revenge gone awry. The authentic voice in which you painted your story was full of tension and a realness. Thank you for creating such a lovely word collage that tells a heart-wrenching truth.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
    Thanks for the review and single star. A first for me, ha ha. Sad how one thoughtless act of revenge can ripple forever. A few cases of this all over the world, I'm sure. Have a wonderful Sunday.
reply by JLR on 20-Oct-2019