A Hymn of Hot Tamales
Epic eating enjoyment...17 total reviews
Comment from JLR
I remember them well, the theater with the smell of fresh popcorn and the oversized box of hot tamales. Drowning in a large Dr Pepper. Yes you nailed the perfection if the resulting blast if heart. Good write good success
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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I remember them well, the theater with the smell of fresh popcorn and the oversized box of hot tamales. Drowning in a large Dr Pepper. Yes you nailed the perfection if the resulting blast if heart. Good write good success
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Yum!! Thank you for your review - glad you enjoyed the sweet, spicy fun!
Comment from Debbie Pope
Well this is darn cute. Personally, I do not think hot tamales are delectable at all, but they certainly make for a good poem about candy. It was the title that drew me in. I wasn't even thinking it would be a candy poem. The title was simply intriguing. Then you keep with the Mexican flair with your use of spices and festival. My favorite description is "red bantam bombs."
Thank you for this sweet treat of a poem.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Well this is darn cute. Personally, I do not think hot tamales are delectable at all, but they certainly make for a good poem about candy. It was the title that drew me in. I wasn't even thinking it would be a candy poem. The title was simply intriguing. Then you keep with the Mexican flair with your use of spices and festival. My favorite description is "red bantam bombs."
Thank you for this sweet treat of a poem.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review - glad you enjoyed the sweet, spicy fun!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Four squares, all 5-7-5 greatly tasty, funny, and as a kid one can enjoy to have some Hot Tamale, sticky spices; I have enjoyed each work is well said, well done.
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Four squares, all 5-7-5 greatly tasty, funny, and as a kid one can enjoy to have some Hot Tamale, sticky spices; I have enjoyed each work is well said, well done.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review - glad you enjoyed the sweet, spicy fun!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness! I want to taste one! I have never heard of them before and your descriptions made them very tempting! Sugary and spicy, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Oh my goodness! I want to taste one! I have never heard of them before and your descriptions made them very tempting! Sugary and spicy, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Quick, order some from Amazon - you'll not regret it! lol! Thank you for your fun review, Dolly!
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from Melonie Kirchoff
This is such a great entry for the sweets 5-7-5 contest! I love the language used and the imagery. It made me crave hot tamales as that is one of my go-to movie candies. Good luck!
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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This is such a great entry for the sweets 5-7-5 contest! I love the language used and the imagery. It made me crave hot tamales as that is one of my go-to movie candies. Good luck!
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Aren't they just yummy?! Thank you for your fun review, Melonie!
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
Mucho caliente. Excellent rhyming scheme, delectable treats, great accompanying artwork. I just wish they came in chocolate flavor. wish you well in the contest... ...ec
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Mucho caliente. Excellent rhyming scheme, delectable treats, great accompanying artwork. I just wish they came in chocolate flavor. wish you well in the contest... ...ec
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Oh, Elaine, THANK YOU!! And I'm so glad you enjoyed my fun offering -- although, gotta tell you, I'm just grateful there's no chocolate in them cuz ever since the 'the change', my body decided chocolate makes a great migraine trigger...ugh!! :) :) ;) :) Your review and wonderful comments are so very appreciated - take care and have a wonderful weekend!!
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wow, I'm just the opposite - after my change, I stopped getting migraines - an issue since I was 13. hope alleges well with you...
