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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "WithintheParametersofaDeadPoets "Poetry at it's finest.
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Comment from Gail Denham
Good philosophy and also a firm conviction of God's sovereign will in our lives. The hurts, sickness, and pain is there for sure - and we must muster on, keep going.
You describe all this so well, plus your faith in God.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Good philosophy and also a firm conviction of God's sovereign will in our lives. The hurts, sickness, and pain is there for sure - and we must muster on, keep going.
You describe all this so well, plus your faith in God.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much for this Beautiful Review.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Lulube
A little bit of rhyming and a good flow makes for a great read. a great 3 stanza's for your view of where you are in your lifetime and the calmness is felt through your words. good to hear.
lulube
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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A little bit of rhyming and a good flow makes for a great read. a great 3 stanza's for your view of where you are in your lifetime and the calmness is felt through your words. good to hear.
lulube
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thanks again Lulube.
Ricky
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welcome
lulube
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi Ricky,
This has a nice clear message to all that reads it. always look forward and never back. So often we dwell on the past that cannot be changed and forget that the future is ours to make.
Good read.
Brenda.x
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Hi Ricky,
This has a nice clear message to all that reads it. always look forward and never back. So often we dwell on the past that cannot be changed and forget that the future is ours to make.
Good read.
Brenda.x
Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Yes brand that we've all been in the bed in the dark place but I'm a firm believer no matter how many times you fall down in your pile of s*** you just clean yourself off and keep on going!
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Nowhereman1
Very well written chapter. This is the first chapter I have seen but this part was very inspirational. Thank you for sharing such a personal story I am glad I got to see this part.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Very well written chapter. This is the first chapter I have seen but this part was very inspirational. Thank you for sharing such a personal story I am glad I got to see this part.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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My pleasure,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I like this poem. It feels like a preface to something bigger and better. I think it reflects the reality of life but also hope. Nice half-rhyme with 'time' and 'kind.' Here is the poetic refrain: One step at a time never backwards.
I kind of think I would add a comma after 'time' there. Super share!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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I like this poem. It feels like a preface to something bigger and better. I think it reflects the reality of life but also hope. Nice half-rhyme with 'time' and 'kind.' Here is the poetic refrain: One step at a time never backwards.
I kind of think I would add a comma after 'time' there. Super share!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your help and support.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Never backwards is the best way to be as it keeps the forward momentum going - no use in looking back since what is done cannot be undone. Well penned and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Never backwards is the best way to be as it keeps the forward momentum going - no use in looking back since what is done cannot be undone. Well penned and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Words so True Angel
How's the girls?
Charlie
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a lovely offering with wonderful sentiments for the day: to always move forward...carrying hope and memories in our hearts...but not looking backward to them! ;) Thank you for sharing those words of hope! ;)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Such a lovely offering with wonderful sentiments for the day: to always move forward...carrying hope and memories in our hearts...but not looking backward to them! ;) Thank you for sharing those words of hope! ;)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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My pleasure Yvette.
Ricky