Comment from
sunnilicious
You're very passionate about the start of America. I picked up on that from reading the poem. Well thought out and clearly written. Creative perspective. Good work. God bless you :)
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
Thank you for the time to read and review this poem offering. Blessings.
Comment from
Ricky1024
This is a '3-6-9 Poetry Contest Entry'
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
Thank you for the review and encouragement. Always Greatly Appreciated.
reply by Ricky1024 on 15-Oct-2019
reply by Ricky1024 on 15-Oct-2019
Comment from
Susan X Smith
This is a striking poem about the plight of Native Americans. Living in New York City, I haven't had much experience with this issue, although a dear friend of mine was half Navajo. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
Thank you for the review and compliments. Blessings to you.