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Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your granddaughter in this song and photograph, especially since my son is a forty-two-year-old bachelor! I enjoyed the lyrical repeats, especially of the syllables in her name. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Thank you for sharing your granddaughter in this song and photograph, especially since my son is a forty-two-year-old bachelor! I enjoyed the lyrical repeats, especially of the syllables in her name. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Joan
Comment from sunnilicious
You're hilarious. That is a very focused poem. Praise the baby. But I'm sure that's like great technique for setting a good confidence level. There are so many psychologies. The repetition and repeats work together nicely. Excellent work.
God bless you and your family :)
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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You're hilarious. That is a very focused poem. Praise the baby. But I'm sure that's like great technique for setting a good confidence level. There are so many psychologies. The repetition and repeats work together nicely. Excellent work.
God bless you and your family :)
Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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This song puts babies named Kimberly asleep. It worked on her sister Emily as well. Of course, I was saying Emily instead of Kimberly, because, well, Kimberly wasn?t born yet. In fact, Liam was born between them and he never went for the singing at all. He was more a go, go, go, go, sleep baby.
Thank you for giving this a look.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
In a few repetitive verses you express your love eloquently for this beautiful and blessed bundle of joy. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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In a few repetitive verses you express your love eloquently for this beautiful and blessed bundle of joy. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Thanks. MA
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Bill. LOL! Spoken like an enamored grandpa. How sweet that is to tout her so well. She is a cutie. Before you know it, she'll be running around the house. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Hi Bill. LOL! Spoken like an enamored grandpa. How sweet that is to tout her so well. She is a cutie. Before you know it, she'll be running around the house. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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She crawled today. : )
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Oh my. It seemed like she was just born. Congrats. You're going to have your work cut out for you now that she's ambulating. Enjoy her--and I know you will. Marilyn
Comment from nomi338
with a very popular name. In my family alone I have four nieces and one sister in-law named Kimberley. I am fond pf the name, but decided against gifting my own daughter with that name., just to cut down on the likely resulting confusion.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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with a very popular name. In my family alone I have four nieces and one sister in-law named Kimberley. I am fond pf the name, but decided against gifting my own daughter with that name., just to cut down on the likely resulting confusion.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Kimberly may not learn her name from me, as I keep calling her Megan or Emily ?- my other two granddaughters.
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That poor, poor baby, saddled with a senile grandpa. LOL.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Aaaaawww, you're supposed to give us at least a start on a melody.... but, no worries, I made up my own, but you'll need to change 'alive' to "aliiiiiiiiiive"... :) :) :) Great one, Sir Bill, and what a beautiful little angel!! ;) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Aaaaawww, you're supposed to give us at least a start on a melody.... but, no worries, I made up my own, but you'll need to change 'alive' to "aliiiiiiiiiive"... :) :) :) Great one, Sir Bill, and what a beautiful little angel!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Sung to the tune of Kimberly. : )
Comment from judiverse
That's what I keep telling my cats. This is really sweet, and I'm sure Kimberly agrees 100% with your declaration that she's the greatest ever baby girl. (My grandfather used to say I was so sweet, so smart, and so pretty when I was a little girl. He covered all the bases. Is the baby pictured Kimberly? How sweet! judi
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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That's what I keep telling my cats. This is really sweet, and I'm sure Kimberly agrees 100% with your declaration that she's the greatest ever baby girl. (My grandfather used to say I was so sweet, so smart, and so pretty when I was a little girl. He covered all the bases. Is the baby pictured Kimberly? How sweet! judi
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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I took this today while babysitting.
Comment from Cass Carlton
Congratulations Oh doting grandpapa. It looks as though the lullabye put the little angel to sleep. She is adorable though. Such beautiful skin. Does she smile yet? I bet she has a way of getting to your very core with just a lift of those long eyelashes. Are her eyes blue? Her skin is so fair I think she must have blue eyes. Dear little girl, Bill, precious and sweet. So lucky to be born to be loved. Cheers from (clucky) Cass
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Congratulations Oh doting grandpapa. It looks as though the lullabye put the little angel to sleep. She is adorable though. Such beautiful skin. Does she smile yet? I bet she has a way of getting to your very core with just a lift of those long eyelashes. Are her eyes blue? Her skin is so fair I think she must have blue eyes. Dear little girl, Bill, precious and sweet. So lucky to be born to be loved. Cheers from (clucky) Cass
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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She has dark hair and deep brown eyes. Her smile is like a sun burst.
Comment from lyenochka
You've been so busy, Bill! I'm so glad you are enjoying your time with Kimberly! She's lovely!!
Now the only thing that you need to tell us is what melody to sing your Kimberly song to.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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You've been so busy, Bill! I'm so glad you are enjoying your time with Kimberly! She's lovely!!
Now the only thing that you need to tell us is what melody to sing your Kimberly song to.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Roll your own, lyenochka
Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. It is very easy to read and understand. I think that it is neat and unique. Very good work! I have enjoyed reading this poem.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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I like how you structured this poem. It is very easy to read and understand. I think that it is neat and unique. Very good work! I have enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks, Raul
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You're welcome