She Thought She Knew Him
Who can one trust?6 total reviews
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
Whoa, laugh out loud and then scream. Were they, or just he, on a dinner date? Wish I could hear more. Great story matching a great photo. Good luck in the contest... ...ec
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Whoa, laugh out loud and then scream. Were they, or just he, on a dinner date? Wish I could hear more. Great story matching a great photo. Good luck in the contest... ...ec
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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I guess just him. Thanks for the read and the review.
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you're welcome... ...ec
Comment from sunnilicious
Obviously, he trusts her enough to tell the truth. That should be a sign of safety. Right? Great visual imagery created. Well thought out. Tackfully written. Nice work :)
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Obviously, he trusts her enough to tell the truth. That should be a sign of safety. Right? Great visual imagery created. Well thought out. Tackfully written. Nice work :)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Don't think so, you know its a power thing. Thanks for the read and the review.
Comment from Sharon Feldt
In three short sentences you have completely horrified me! Great work--well done! Cleverly wrought--anticipation, horror, consequences of a poor choice!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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In three short sentences you have completely horrified me! Great work--well done! Cleverly wrought--anticipation, horror, consequences of a poor choice!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Thanks much for your read and your encouraging comment.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a horror based complete story in exactly three sentences. The content does have a bit of SPAG, but other than that reads okay. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a horror based complete story in exactly three sentences. The content does have a bit of SPAG, but other than that reads okay. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Thanks for the heads-up I changed to read:
"Thanks for the ride," Suzy said, as she belted herself in. Glancing down at the floor in front of the passenger seat, she noticed blood stained panty-hose. He grinned and said, ?She was very tasty, my dear.?
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Yep! That fixed it. Best to catch those things early to avoid feedback issues down the road.
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Thank you again for your help.
Comment from Susan X Smith
I think it's time to unfasten the seat belt and make a run for it even if it causes a run in your pantyhose, lol. This is a cute story. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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I think it's time to unfasten the seat belt and make a run for it even if it causes a run in your pantyhose, lol. This is a cute story. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Thanks much for your read and comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from Bill Pinder
It looks like you met the requirements for this contest and told a horror story in three lines. I'm glad that has never happened to me. Thanks for sharing this creative entry.
Bill
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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It looks like you met the requirements for this contest and told a horror story in three lines. I'm glad that has never happened to me. Thanks for sharing this creative entry.
Bill
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Thanks much for your read and comments. Much appreciated.