LOVE OF NATURE
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12 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely free verse Trisha and the last thing I would have thought is that you wrote it because you were depressed. It is full of light and love and flying free. I loved it,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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This is a lovely free verse Trisha and the last thing I would have thought is that you wrote it because you were depressed. It is full of light and love and flying free. I loved it,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 31-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thanks for your positive review!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Debbie Pope
Oh, I am so glad that you are back, Trisha. I don't find your poem depressing at all. I'm not sure if there is death involved or just a lover leaving to spread his/her wings. I love to think of people's spirits being with us though. That is comforting to me, not depressing
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Oh, I am so glad that you are back, Trisha. I don't find your poem depressing at all. I'm not sure if there is death involved or just a lover leaving to spread his/her wings. I love to think of people's spirits being with us though. That is comforting to me, not depressing
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Not ?back? still floundering.
Thanks for your positive review!
Hugs, Trisha
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Forget the review. I'm praying for you.
Comment from Rikki66
When it is time to be free from earth's bonds, to be free of the earthly body. When it is time for freedom. How can you be depressed WHEN?
Rikki******************
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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When it is time to be free from earth's bonds, to be free of the earthly body. When it is time for freedom. How can you be depressed WHEN?
Rikki******************
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thanks for your positive review!
Hugs, Trisha
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Truly welcome
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Loyal! Thanks
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Welcome
Rikki
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
LOL @ notes! Why is it everyone here seems to think everything folks write is real and about them - ever heard of an imagination? This is a well penned Free Verse and a lovely reading experience. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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LOL @ notes! Why is it everyone here seems to think everything folks write is real and about them - ever heard of an imagination? This is a well penned Free Verse and a lovely reading experience. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thanks for your positive review!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Bill Pinder
This is a great poem of hope. You did a great job of expressing it with well chosen words that express a carefree and joyful spirit. Thanks for sharing! Bill
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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This is a great poem of hope. You did a great job of expressing it with well chosen words that express a carefree and joyful spirit. Thanks for sharing! Bill
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thanks for your positive review!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem seemingly inspired by the artwork. One day our souls will be set free from the body and then she can fly like the butterflies and land where she wishes.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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A very well-written free verse poem seemingly inspired by the artwork. One day our souls will be set free from the body and then she can fly like the butterflies and land where she wishes.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Sorry, I?m still not back fully
Thanks for your positive review!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I know what it is like to be tied to the millstone of work and earning a living and now I feel free as everyday I am able to please myself. Any effort I put in is for my own benefit. I have worked for some selfish and ungrateful people during my years at work. I felt your freedom here Trisha, just like the butterfly enjoying the view, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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I know what it is like to be tied to the millstone of work and earning a living and now I feel free as everyday I am able to please myself. Any effort I put in is for my own benefit. I have worked for some selfish and ungrateful people during my years at work. I felt your freedom here Trisha, just like the butterfly enjoying the view, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thanks for your positive review!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Grace T.
Free verse is a perfect medium for a poem on being free, it only highlights the spirit of freedom. One thing I would leave out is the use of love'll .. you could have the same effect using 'love stays' or 'love staying'. It has potential, with the omission of a few lines
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Free verse is a perfect medium for a poem on being free, it only highlights the spirit of freedom. One thing I would leave out is the use of love'll .. you could have the same effect using 'love stays' or 'love staying'. It has potential, with the omission of a few lines
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Good luck when you do post anything
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL - your author notes just struck me as funny! :) :) But I love the light and 'floaty' feel to this offering, Trisha... as we send part of 'us' with those we love, we hope they take that little part of our spirit with them! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, ma'am!
P.S. So good to hear from you, too -- hope all's well over there with you and your wonderful unique sunshine you always share!! ;) :) Take care of you and keep up the smiling pen!! :) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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LOL - your author notes just struck me as funny! :) :) But I love the light and 'floaty' feel to this offering, Trisha... as we send part of 'us' with those we love, we hope they take that little part of our spirit with them! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, ma'am!
P.S. So good to hear from you, too -- hope all's well over there with you and your wonderful unique sunshine you always share!! ;) :) Take care of you and keep up the smiling pen!! :) :) Yvette
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thanks for your positive review!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written free verse poem you have penned. You used very beautiful imagery from the art work with the dream catcher on it and very lovely words. It was a very peaceful poem to me. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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This is a very beautiful and well written free verse poem you have penned. You used very beautiful imagery from the art work with the dream catcher on it and very lovely words. It was a very peaceful poem to me. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 28-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thanks for your positive review!
Hugs, Trisha