Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL! What a very cool offering for this unique contest -- have so enjoyed reading all of the entries and the different stories!! ;) :) And to think, marriage saved and you get to pay bucks for folks to read now!! ;) :) LOL! ;) Thank you for sharing yours and best of luck in the contest! ;) :)

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019

Thanks for your nice review. I sure enjoyed writing this one, and I thought it would do better, but that is part of the Fanstory experience.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Hi! Great photograph. That was a nice poem. Well thought out and clearly written. Good lyrical flow of rhythm and rhymes. Creative. Good work. Glad your marriage was blest to be saved. Good luck in the contest :)

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019

Thanks for your nice review. I sure enjoyed writing this one, and I thought it would do better, but that is part of the Fanstory experience.

Comment from QC Poet

Excellent

Thank you for Sharing your enjoyable writing on this sites benefit(s) contest. The 20 member cents (or chance at more) are valued as are the very helpful fellow fanstorians reviews and suggestions. As in Life humor and wit also take one a long way, Good Luck in the contest if entered and Blessings to you. As for myself, I'm still trying to figure out if this is a good repository or depository of my postings. LOL!

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019

Thanks for your nice review. I sure enjoyed writing this one, and I thought it would do better, but that is part of the Fanstory experience.

Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry

Excellent

Great read! Love how you were at first frustrated but came to find and to appreciated FanStory and its usefulness and camaraderie. You expressed your gratefulness to this site in a softly amusing way.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019

Thanks for your nice review. I sure enjoyed writing this one, and I thought it would do better, but that is part of the Fanstory experience.

reply by Marilyn Lou Berry on 14-Oct-2019

I get it! We persevere!

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

This is a humorous response to the writing prompt and a respectable entry. The picture is also quite funny, I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019

Thanks for your nice review. I sure enjoyed writing this one, and I thought it would do better, but that is part of the Fanstory experience.

reply by Susan X Smith on 14-Oct-2019

I did not have a chance to vote because I was busy but I would have voted for you, lol

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019

Thanks. There is still time I believe...

reply by Susan X Smith on 14-Oct-2019

Sorry, the contest was over when I wrote that note.