Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

What a very cool offering for this unique contest -- have so enjoyed reading all of the entries and the different stories!! ;) :) Your twist that you know hear and see like a poet is really cool ---- and I can relate!! ;) :) Thank you for sharing yours and best of luck in the contest! ;) :)

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019

Thank you for your read and kind words. Much appreciated.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Hi! That was a nice poem. Well thought out and clearly written. Good lyrical flow of rhythm and rhymes. Creative. Good work. Good luck in the contest

I write down words that catch my attention. Sometimes it goes into poetry. I like that you jot phrases. That's a great idea :)

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019

Thanks for you read and your kind comments. Very appreciated.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-You have expressed your
sincere feelings about
being on the site.
-I like all of the examples
of writing styles you have tried.
-I think many of us learn
and try many new things.
-I also like the verse about
listening for phrases and
keeping a notebook.
-A good conclusion, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019

Thanks for your read and review.

reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Oct-2019

You are welcome.

Comment from Darlene Franklin

Excellent

I have come to value Fanstory greatly. I especially love your last line! Because it's so great to have a community of second pairs of eyes to read over something!

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019

Thanks for your read and review.