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unrhymed poem

11 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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What a very cool offering for this unique contest -- have so enjoyed reading all of the entries and the different stories!! ;) :) Your free verse just takes the reader to so many different points that the emotions can't help but wrap themselves around your words! :) Thank you for sharing yours and best of luck in the contest! ;) :)

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
    Hi! You're very kind. Thank you. God bless you :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about your experience with FanStory. Many poets and writers are happy to be here and have the opportuniy to grow and have a platform to show tgei work.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
    Hi Sandra! Did I go in over my head... Lolz. You're nice. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Patty Palmer
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Well, if you got the rules wrong theater that can happen is
you won't win. But at least you a great review for FanStory and told how we make friends and care about each other...I had written a poem for this contest but I didn't get it sent because I'm sick in the hospital.
Good luck on the contest!
Patty

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
    Hi Patty. I hope you go home soon. Feel better. You're nice. Thank you. God bless you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is an interesting poem. This site does offer the writer a lot of freedom of expression and, basically, anything goes. We do make good friends even though we may never meet them. I enjoyed reading this and best of luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
    Hi Marilyn. Okay, thank you. Have a good week :)
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for sharing your ideas about creative writing and the benefits of FanStory. I think you automatically answered the questions posed in the prompt. Poetry is my hobby too, and FanStory is always available to stimulate and broadcast our creative impulse. Big cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Hi Joan. You're nice. Yes, we all have our own perspectives. Thank you Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious) :)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a well penned Free Verse which speaks eloquently to all the reasons why FS means so much to you. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Hi! Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious) :)
Comment from JLR
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More than I could ever possibly say, the difference between a professional and a novice us so clear too me. It is such talent, such as yours, in display that keeps me coming back day after day. With a hope and a prayer to emote with such grace that you have shared in this piece.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Hi JLR. Thank you again. Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious) :)
Comment from RodG
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I like how we get to know you as a writer and fellow FanStory member in this poem. You certainly spell out all the site's virtues and reasons for joining, but mostly we meet YOU.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Hi Rod. You're nice. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious) :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Fanstory worth its name in activities, offers members to grow creativity, power of writing, artistic mode of expression, pleasures of earning by reviews and getting joy by posting, growing fans; well said, well done.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Hi Alcreator Litt Dear. You're nice. Thank you Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious) :)
Comment from Alex Rosel
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I like the theme here that an artist gives life to an idea {thumbs up}.

"Save here, Spend there" -- Oh, how true. FanStory is a perfect example of "green" living; everything is recycled {winks}.

Your poem seems to consider some of the benefits -- for example, "observe to hone skills" -- and the disadvantages -- for example, "Badmouth me [...] into a bigger emotional basket-case".
I like your approach; we don't live in a monochrome world {smiles}.

Best of luck with this when the voting booth opens {smiles}.



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 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Hi Alex. You're nice. Thank you Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious) :)