"Beautiful!"
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "I Want U-2 Know"Poetry at it's finest.
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
AMEN! The demise of the mortal body is not an ending but just a beginning. We were not meant to live on this earthly plane for long as our true home in heaven is where each eternity is spent. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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AMEN! The demise of the mortal body is not an ending but just a beginning. We were not meant to live on this earthly plane for long as our true home in heaven is where each eternity is spent. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Thanks again.
Ricky
Comment from Alex Rosel
I like your constant refrain repeated at the end of each stanza:
"Even after, that very last Breath!";
"You too can Live again and take in a large and generous Breath!";
"Even after that very, last, Breath of *Life!".
It's a very effective literary/poetic technique {smiles}.
Nicely structured {thumbs up}.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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I like your constant refrain repeated at the end of each stanza:
"Even after, that very last Breath!";
"You too can Live again and take in a large and generous Breath!";
"Even after that very, last, Breath of *Life!".
It's a very effective literary/poetic technique {smiles}.
Nicely structured {thumbs up}.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thanks Alex always a pleasure to work with you.
Have a Blessed Weekend.
Ricky
Comment from kahpot
This story and notes though very sad is quite encouraging, I would how ever like to see the paragraph that starts "and finally" to be the last paragraph just before your word count, thank you very much for sharing this****kahpot
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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This story and notes though very sad is quite encouraging, I would how ever like to see the paragraph that starts "and finally" to be the last paragraph just before your word count, thank you very much for sharing this****kahpot
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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My pleasure to provide and produce this product.
Doctor Ricky 1024