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Publicity Call.

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Comment from shaffer40
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I like the paradox of this little story -- the good and the bad, the likely price for a cheap thrill -- and the invitation for a bite is funny. I also like your title and the sub-heading.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019

Comment from Sharon Feldt
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Your poem and illustration are both humorous! Very appropriate for the season. Your words and message definitely brought a smile to my face--thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019

Comment from JLR
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Great graphic, very cute warning, perfect as we come closer and closer to all hallowed eve'. One must simply must watch where they go, with the vampiress under the bough.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019

Comment from NickieT
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This title is so wonderfully clever. I really appreciate the idea of someone utilizing beauty as a disguise. There is both truth and humor in this piece and they play off one another nicely.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019