Not Just Words...
A '1-9-1 Poetry' Offering8 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree with you here and your words resonated with me, a simple truth and a lot of support from others and you have all the luck in the world, much enjoyed, you win my vote here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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I so agree with you here and your words resonated with me, a simple truth and a lot of support from others and you have all the luck in the world, much enjoyed, you win my vote here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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These short forms are always a bit of a challenge- so glad you enjoyed my take on this one! Thank you so much!!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-9-1 poem, Not Just Words, has the correct set up and gives us a totally cool saying to empower others. Good people's actions outshine the best of luck. So true.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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This 1-9-1 poem, Not Just Words, has the correct set up and gives us a totally cool saying to empower others. Good people's actions outshine the best of luck. So true.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review, Bill!
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Your poem was interesting. The image helped with the message. I am not familiar with 1-9-1 but your poem meets the requirements of the contest. Thank you for sharing. Blessings. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Your poem was interesting. The image helped with the message. I am not familiar with 1-9-1 but your poem meets the requirements of the contest. Thank you for sharing. Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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What do you suggest correcting? You have awarded a rating that, by definition, means that the piece requires work or corrections but
have listed none. Could you please say what the corrections and/or issues are that need to be fixed so that I may correct them? Thank you.
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I am sorry but I didn't understand the poem. I don't know what changes could be made since I don't understand the 1-9-1 format. I thought the rating system was for my overall opinion that I had on the poem. ~Brenda
Comment from Melonie Kirchoff
Great 1-9-1 poem entry! I like the image you chose to go along with the words. It seems like a hard format to stick to but you really did well. Keep it up!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Great 1-9-1 poem entry! I like the image you chose to go along with the words. It seems like a hard format to stick to but you really did well. Keep it up!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for your review!!
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
Like it! A poem of hope in a hard form to create in. A really good accompanying art piece also. Thanks a lot for the impact of your compact poem. You showed clever creativity here!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Like it! A poem of hope in a hard form to create in. A really good accompanying art piece also. Thanks a lot for the impact of your compact poem. You showed clever creativity here!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Thanks much for your review!!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Sweet and simple, your topic can expand into a more profound story, but for the purpose of this contest I think your entry is one of the best. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Sweet and simple, your topic can expand into a more profound story, but for the purpose of this contest I think your entry is one of the best. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Thanks much for your review!!
Comment from Michele Harber
I like the idea that, if one wants to achieve anything, they must take action and not rely on luck. Except for the very rare exception, you'll make much more money working a steady job than relying on the lottery, and that's a good message to teach. It's a hard one to get across in only 11 syllables, but you did so admirably.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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I like the idea that, if one wants to achieve anything, they must take action and not rely on luck. Except for the very rare exception, you'll make much more money working a steady job than relying on the lottery, and that's a good message to teach. It's a hard one to get across in only 11 syllables, but you did so admirably.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much for your review!!
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You?re welcome.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this wise message. Good people who want what's right to happen don't rely on LUCK; they do what it takes to bring about good.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this wise message. Good people who want what's right to happen don't rely on LUCK; they do what it takes to bring about good.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much for your review!
