Incandescence
1-9-1 poetry12 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I must have missed this one Melissa, congratulations on your second placing, well deserved, a fine 1-9-1, I see these scenes in England often, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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I must have missed this one Melissa, congratulations on your second placing, well deserved, a fine 1-9-1, I see these scenes in England often, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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I love seeing full moons through tree branches. Especially during the autumn. Thanks so much Dolly.
Melissa
Comment from BeasPeas
A fine entry in the 1-9-1 contest. Descriptive. I've seen sights like that and it seems the moon is enormous. Best of luck in the contest with this worthy piece. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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A fine entry in the 1-9-1 contest. Descriptive. I've seen sights like that and it seems the moon is enormous. Best of luck in the contest with this worthy piece. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Hi Marilyn. Thank you. I love full moons and especially ones seen through branches.
Melissa
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I agree.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. That's a very nice picture you have included with your poem. Your poem easily meets the 1-9-1 style requirement. You made a nice statement with your poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Hello mystery writer. That's a very nice picture you have included with your poem. Your poem easily meets the 1-9-1 style requirement. You made a nice statement with your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you.
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You're welcome
Comment from juliaSjames
Dear Mystery Writer, you have penned a lovely and evocative poem that flows smoothly. This difficult 1-9-1 prompt is no match for your skill. I like the underlying melancholy. It seems that the moonlight is seeking comfort from the spreading trees.
I wish you well in the contest. You have my vote.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Dear Mystery Writer, you have penned a lovely and evocative poem that flows smoothly. This difficult 1-9-1 prompt is no match for your skill. I like the underlying melancholy. It seems that the moonlight is seeking comfort from the spreading trees.
I wish you well in the contest. You have my vote.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much Julia!!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-9-1 poem, Incandescence, has the correct set up and sees the moon-eating tree capture that shining orb for further study by squirrels.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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This 1-9-1 poem, Incandescence, has the correct set up and sees the moon-eating tree capture that shining orb for further study by squirrels.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Hahah. Bill you are a hoot!! Thank you.
Comment from NickieT
I love the idea of moonlight entwining around the trees. The visual is absolutely stunning with this picture. This one got my vote! Best of luck with this entry
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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I love the idea of moonlight entwining around the trees. The visual is absolutely stunning with this picture. This one got my vote! Best of luck with this entry
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a pretty poem which well meets the contest requirements. You also selected a pretty picture to go with the words. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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This is a pretty poem which well meets the contest requirements. You also selected a pretty picture to go with the words. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you.
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Thank you.
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Thank you.
Comment from Mark D. R.
This is a difficult poem format, but your writing and selected artwork overcame that issue.
IMHO... 'blue' does not have to be capitalized. If your poet style is to do so, then consider a period to end your poem.
Your blue moonlit scene is really a great image.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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This is a difficult poem format, but your writing and selected artwork overcame that issue.
IMHO... 'blue' does not have to be capitalized. If your poet style is to do so, then consider a period to end your poem.
Your blue moonlit scene is really a great image.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you!!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oooooo....love the visual this one defines with those very definitive 'bookends' and the almost romantic 'in-between'! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Oooooo....love the visual this one defines with those very definitive 'bookends' and the almost romantic 'in-between'! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Melonie Kirchoff
Great entry for a 1-9-1 writing prompt. I love the paining of the moon behind the tree branches, it works perfectly with your poem. Good luck. Happy writing!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Great entry for a 1-9-1 writing prompt. I love the paining of the moon behind the tree branches, it works perfectly with your poem. Good luck. Happy writing!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you!