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Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
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There are woods a stone throw from my town and at the entrance, there is a patch for shrubs full of blackberries...I love eating them on the spot ..only a small portion make it home.. ( biggrin ).


I like them at breakfast in plain yoghurt. I have a friend in Austria that loves to conserve fruits including black berries......she used to send us several of her jars during the year for my pa to enjoy.

This is a well written entry, certainly a great entry for children :...a smart way to teach them, in an entertaining manner, about their environment and the beautiful fruits mother nature offers us.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019

Comment from Y. M. Roger
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One of my boys' favorite pies in the summertime - Blackberry (second only to raspberry!)! A very fun and hunger-inducing collection of rhyming couplets, Ronnie -- thanx so much for sharing that smile for the day!! ;) :)

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019

Comment from Melonie Kirchoff
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I loved your poem! It was a bit of nostalgia for me because I grew up with wild blackberries growing on our land. Great poem, keep it up and happy writing!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019