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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a technically sound 5-7-5 with correct line and syllable count. The content is a cute advertisement for IHOP and I'm sure they'll appreciate the free advertising :). I thought the notes a bit off color and a departure from your usually kind point of view. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This is a technically sound 5-7-5 with correct line and syllable count. The content is a cute advertisement for IHOP and I'm sure they'll appreciate the free advertising :). I thought the notes a bit off color and a departure from your usually kind point of view. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
Comment from Wils
I can relate so much to this. Nothing better than the morning coffee and staff at staff at the various coffee outlets do an amazing job. Very good poem.
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I can relate so much to this. Nothing better than the morning coffee and staff at staff at the various coffee outlets do an amazing job. Very good poem.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019