Farm Life
When Life Doesn't Go as Expected9 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is one of the funniest stories that I have ever read. I am so glad that I chose to read your work. I wasn't expecting this, and I was getting a little bored with the same old same old story. You are quite the narrator. Some of your comments might not belong in the story, at least as you tell it, but the randomness of the line makes it even more interesting to me. For instance, I love the line that Gladys was known for feeding cats in jagged edge spam cans. It's my favorite image. It doesn't really fit, but please don't leave it out.
Thank you, thank you for making me smile tonight. I hope that you win the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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This is one of the funniest stories that I have ever read. I am so glad that I chose to read your work. I wasn't expecting this, and I was getting a little bored with the same old same old story. You are quite the narrator. Some of your comments might not belong in the story, at least as you tell it, but the randomness of the line makes it even more interesting to me. For instance, I love the line that Gladys was known for feeding cats in jagged edge spam cans. It's my favorite image. It doesn't really fit, but please don't leave it out.
Thank you, thank you for making me smile tonight. I hope that you win the contest.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your thoughts and review. I try to write quirky little stories, to make people smile. I?m glad you enjoyed it.
Tirzah
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Thank you for your thoughts and review. I try to write quirky little stories, to make people smile. I?m glad you enjoyed it.
Tirzah
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This was a bit humorous. The lad might have been a little what some people call slow. I think that many times of showing the middle finger was a bit excessive as you've stated so eloquently. I think that the family could have a bit more aggressive with telling him about the finger or its meaning. Banishment was a bit excessive I think. Thanks for sharing this well crafted work you've penned here. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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This was a bit humorous. The lad might have been a little what some people call slow. I think that many times of showing the middle finger was a bit excessive as you've stated so eloquently. I think that the family could have a bit more aggressive with telling him about the finger or its meaning. Banishment was a bit excessive I think. Thanks for sharing this well crafted work you've penned here. Well done!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I appreciate your thoughts and review.
Comment from Raul1
Poor raymond. His Grandmother sewed his hand and it came back to life. I think that this family had a terrible ordeal from the town. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Poor raymond. His Grandmother sewed his hand and it came back to life. I think that this family had a terrible ordeal from the town. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I appreciate your thoughts and review.
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Thank you! I appreciate your thoughts and review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
evidently the great grandmother who sewed the finger back on is the hero in this story. I cannot imagine the finger not getting infection. I'm wondering if this is a non fiction story.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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evidently the great grandmother who sewed the finger back on is the hero in this story. I cannot imagine the finger not getting infection. I'm wondering if this is a non fiction story.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I appreciate your thoughts and review.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Thanks for sharing this unique story about a family going through a rough time due to a traumatic situation and a handicapped child. Good luck in the contest and keep writing.
Bill
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thanks for sharing this unique story about a family going through a rough time due to a traumatic situation and a handicapped child. Good luck in the contest and keep writing.
Bill
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I appreciate your thoughts and review.
Comment from JLR
What a fun read! Fiction or no it brought so many memories of my familtys farm and rural life and the folks immersed in just living. You should do well with the voting booth, thanks for sharing your talent,
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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What a fun read! Fiction or no it brought so many memories of my familtys farm and rural life and the folks immersed in just living. You should do well with the voting booth, thanks for sharing your talent,
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I appreciate your thoughts and review.
Comment from beizanten
Interesting and intriguing first paragraph. A great second paragraph, i love the great grandmother. It both angsty and funny that they was force to move because of that
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Interesting and intriguing first paragraph. A great second paragraph, i love the great grandmother. It both angsty and funny that they was force to move because of that
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I appreciate your thoughts and review.
Comment from tfawcus
A bizarre tale that gives a new connotation to the idea of being fingered. Perhaps the local community would have been more understanding if it hadn't been Raymond's middle finger!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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A bizarre tale that gives a new connotation to the idea of being fingered. Perhaps the local community would have been more understanding if it hadn't been Raymond's middle finger!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I appreciate your thoughts and review.
Comment from tim dodd
thats a silly story
so absurd its almost believable
having worked with the mentally
disabled and the mental insane
guess they are both mentally
disabled now a days
it is a good entry well done
and thanks for sharing
it here on fanstory
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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thats a silly story
so absurd its almost believable
having worked with the mentally
disabled and the mental insane
guess they are both mentally
disabled now a days
it is a good entry well done
and thanks for sharing
it here on fanstory
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I appreciate your thoughts and review.
