Family Ties Volume two.
Viewing comments for Chapter 71 "My Gramma."Second book Of Series.
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Comment from Alex Rosel
Oh, I do like this. You've adopted the 5-7-5 format and enhanced it with a punchy delivery {smiles}. It delivers a lovely read.
Is "G-mom" a colloquialism? It sits a little uneasy with me -- perhaps because I've never heard it before.
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Oh, I do like this. You've adopted the 5-7-5 format and enhanced it with a punchy delivery {smiles}. It delivers a lovely read.
Is "G-mom" a colloquialism? It sits a little uneasy with me -- perhaps because I've never heard it before.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation, rhonnie69.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count
and rhyme are good.
-It is a pleasant scene
as family is sharing tea.
-I like how you include
and describe each one there.
-Thanks for sharing.
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, rhonnie69.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count
and rhyme are good.
-It is a pleasant scene
as family is sharing tea.
-I like how you include
and describe each one there.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
