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Breakfast Anyone?

Food to die for

8 total reviews 
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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there are actions words in this poem; but they are nasty words which can hurt someone verbally and abusively. Sorry I cannot stand to see a woman hit. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh my goodness! Revenge here in such terrible violence and of course this is sometimes what happens . . . Murder ensues after much provocation, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    I am glad you liked it. I hope it gets your vote when the time comes.
Comment from juliaSjames
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This story gives a whole new meaning to flash in the pan. I suppose the moral is that everyone has a breaking point so nag and criticize at your peril. Accomplished write. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    I am glad you liked it. I hope it gets your voe when the time comes.
Comment from Patty Palmer
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Violence is not the answer! LOL Just eat the eggs and be quiet! LOL
Moral of the story: Don't cook the eggs before the cereal is ready! And Don't forget to duck!

Have a great day!
Patty

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Thank you so glad you liked it. I hope I get your vote,
reply by Patty Palmer on 09-Oct-2019
    You're very welcome for the interview
    Patty
Comment from Susan X Smith
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Ouch! That had a mean ending. You managed to tell a complete story within the allotted space limit. Did you consider adding a picture? Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Thank you so glad you liked it. Hope I get your vote.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Crime over the breakfast I guess this dresses well the approaching Halloween. Interesting idea for a flash fiction. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    THank you for your review.
Comment from Cindy Warren
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Poor Kelly. Married to a man who can't do anything right, and then he smashes her head with a hot frying pan. LOL Seems to me she was a real bitch.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Yes she was
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow... somebody didn't take their 'happy pills' this morning.... and that would be an open 'somebody', yeah?! A heckuva surprise on this one, mystery author! ;) Good luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Thank you. Hope I get your vote.