What Breaks My Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "As He Lays There"Poems and stories tellin' it like I see it.
3 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
A heavyweight contender for the contest, dear writer of mine. You described a small taste of the agony and sorrow in such a senseless attack. Life is so precious. All life is so very precious.
Sending you my best today and for the upcoming contest,
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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A heavyweight contender for the contest, dear writer of mine. You described a small taste of the agony and sorrow in such a senseless attack. Life is so precious. All life is so very precious.
Sending you my best today and for the upcoming contest,
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you ever so much for reviewing, and the comments and the best wishes, dear friend.
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My pleasure entirely. Xoxo
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is a topical and poignant flash fiction piece. I particularly like the imagery of blood pooling around the victim; it brings home stark reality with a few choice words {smiles}.
Wishing you the best of luck with the contest judging committee {smiles}.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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This is a topical and poignant flash fiction piece. I particularly like the imagery of blood pooling around the victim; it brings home stark reality with a few choice words {smiles}.
Wishing you the best of luck with the contest judging committee {smiles}.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you ever so much for the review, comments and wishes. All very much appreciated.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a complete and compelling story in exactly 50 words. The content is both timely and relevant since scenes like this happen every day and almost everywhere. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a complete and compelling story in exactly 50 words. The content is both timely and relevant since scenes like this happen every day and almost everywhere. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much for the review, comments and wishes. Deeply appreciated.