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Comment from Elaine Chiodi
A great combination of portrait, quote, and your writing. In just six words, you summed up the reasoning behind two of mankind's biggest dilemmas - patience and temptation. Well done. Good luck in the contest... ...ec
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A great combination of portrait, quote, and your writing. In just six words, you summed up the reasoning behind two of mankind's biggest dilemmas - patience and temptation. Well done. Good luck in the contest... ...ec
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
Comment from NickieT
I like how your poem tells a cautionary tale within those six words. You have a strong entry that carries with it a tale as old as time - as people are always learning that just because something appears as good doesn't mean that it equates to good.
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I like how your poem tells a cautionary tale within those six words. You have a strong entry that carries with it a tale as old as time - as people are always learning that just because something appears as good doesn't mean that it equates to good.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
Comment from Y. M. Roger
I would say that it is MANY TIMES... yeah?! ;) :) A very good offering for the contest, sir! ;) I would suggest, however, removing the quotes and the period... maybe the capitalization (except, of course, Satan).... just suggestions, but they seem to 'take away' from your words/meaning in the short form... ;) ) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
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I would say that it is MANY TIMES... yeah?! ;) :) A very good offering for the contest, sir! ;) I would suggest, however, removing the quotes and the period... maybe the capitalization (except, of course, Satan).... just suggestions, but they seem to 'take away' from your words/meaning in the short form... ;) ) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019