Love Long Distance
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Joined-at-the-Hip - Chapter 13"A Wartime Romance
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Comment from Dihalia
I liked your story. It was very interesting and romantic. I love letters so your way to express the love between two people was perfect. Thank you for the notes, very interesting too. Keep writing!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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I liked your story. It was very interesting and romantic. I love letters so your way to express the love between two people was perfect. Thank you for the notes, very interesting too. Keep writing!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Hi Dihalia! We are so glad you like our story and find it interesting and romantic. HURRAH! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. We'll keep writing, for sure! We're currently working on Chapter 14, so stay tuned--it's coming soon! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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Your welcome! :)
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I would say letters are always a helpful way to show events and feelings and document dates of when those events happen. It sounds like Cathy is fighting extreme depression. I was a little bit confused by the change in font color in the inclusion of the story deer hunting, but perhaps that was unintentional. Interesting slice-of-life details for life back in 1964. Hope Cathy pulls through.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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I would say letters are always a helpful way to show events and feelings and document dates of when those events happen. It sounds like Cathy is fighting extreme depression. I was a little bit confused by the change in font color in the inclusion of the story deer hunting, but perhaps that was unintentional. Interesting slice-of-life details for life back in 1964. Hope Cathy pulls through.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Hi CrystieCookie999! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, for your continued support. The bold font is intentional. It's to highlight the conversation with Grandpa and Billy in the letter. We've also done that in previous chapters. Sorry it confused you. Your concern for Cathy is sweet. Stay tuned to find out what happens next. Chapter 14 is in the works and coming soon.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your story is so meaningful because it talks about the military, love, and mental health. How many times a person needs to talk to someone if they are lonely. The best place to be if they are in need of special care.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Your story is so meaningful because it talks about the military, love, and mental health. How many times a person needs to talk to someone if they are lonely. The best place to be if they are in need of special care.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Awesome comments here! Thank you, Rosemary, for reading and reviewing Chapter 13 of Love Long Distance. Your continued support means a lot to us. Stay tuned...Chapter 14 is right around the corner. Wishing you a wonderful week!
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from damommy
This sounds very realistic. I know it's worrisome trading letters and not really knowing what's going on back home. Good touch referencing things from the 1960s.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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This sounds very realistic. I know it's worrisome trading letters and not really knowing what's going on back home. Good touch referencing things from the 1960s.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Hi Yvonne! Thanks so much for stopping by to read and review Chapter 13 of Love Long Distance. We really appreciate the support, and we hope you will continue to follow along. Chapter 14 is in the works and coming soon. Wishing you a wonderful weekend! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from robyn corum
Hey guys,
Wow. I never expected Cathy to be in such a bad way as to need professional help! Bless her heart. Makes me really worry about her -- I mean, if she can't handle him being gone like this, I wonder how she'll handle really BIG, BIG problems in life - like if one of her kids gets bad sick or etc.
Just thinking out loud. Nicely done. Thnaks!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Hey guys,
Wow. I never expected Cathy to be in such a bad way as to need professional help! Bless her heart. Makes me really worry about her -- I mean, if she can't handle him being gone like this, I wonder how she'll handle really BIG, BIG problems in life - like if one of her kids gets bad sick or etc.
Just thinking out loud. Nicely done. Thnaks!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Hi Robyn! Your continued support means so much to us! Thank you for reading and reviewing this chapter. This depression may have some underlying reasons that haven't been revealed yet. Just saying... Your comments are taken well. Time will tell. Chapter 14 is in the works and coming soon. Have a great weekend! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from tfawcus
This forced separation has caused a bit of an emotional roller coaster. A good thing that there's some family support. These things are always more difficult to face alone. The positive tone of Bill's letters must have been a real tonic.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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This forced separation has caused a bit of an emotional roller coaster. A good thing that there's some family support. These things are always more difficult to face alone. The positive tone of Bill's letters must have been a real tonic.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Hi Tony! We really appreciate you continuing to read and review our chapters. Your continued support means a great deal to us! The next chapter is already in the works and coming soon. We'll see what happens when Bill finds out what's going on with Cathy. Wishing you an awesome weekend! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill and Cathy
Comment from Melonie Kirchoff
This is really interesting how it's all letters written back and forth. It was fun to read the line about Oral Roberts because my husband went to ORU back in the day. Great job, keep it up!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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This is really interesting how it's all letters written back and forth. It was fun to read the line about Oral Roberts because my husband went to ORU back in the day. Great job, keep it up!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Hi Melonie, First of all, welcome to FanStory! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. We're glad you like it and encourage you to read the past chapters. We, as well, hope that you will continue to follow along. Chapter 14 is in the works and coming soon. Thank you, also, for sharing about your husband. Wishing you both a wonderful weekend!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Patricia1
This is really interesting! You are very detailed in explaining what is happening along the way. It makes me want to know more and as I'm reading about poor Cathy, I want to pray for her! I know if anyone will help her it will be the good Lord. Of course her beloved Bill will also hopefully be the bright spot to help her in the depressed situation she is in. Keep up the good work! Patricia1:)
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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This is really interesting! You are very detailed in explaining what is happening along the way. It makes me want to know more and as I'm reading about poor Cathy, I want to pray for her! I know if anyone will help her it will be the good Lord. Of course her beloved Bill will also hopefully be the bright spot to help her in the depressed situation she is in. Keep up the good work! Patricia1:)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Hi Patricia! We really appreciate you reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, for your continued support. THANK YOU! Your comments are so kind! That you care and want to pray for Cathy means so much to us. Stay tuned for Chapter 14 to find out what happens next. It is already in the works and will be posted soon.
God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from papa55mike
I hope this book gets printed by somebody. I've read a few chapters and loved every one of them. Best of luck with the rest of the book! I'm rooting for you.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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I hope this book gets printed by somebody. I've read a few chapters and loved every one of them. Best of luck with the rest of the book! I'm rooting for you.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Hi Mike! Thank you SO MUCH for the AWESOME six star rating and review. Also, thank you for your continued support. Plans are to publish this book by the end of this year! We really appreciate your comments, and we're so glad you are rooting for us. A double "SALUTE" to you! Chapter 14 is already in the works and coming soon. Wishing you all the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Ulla
Hi to the two of you. I'm so sorry that Cathy is going through such a hard time. I certainly hope she will be okay soon. War time must have been such a strain. The fear of your loved ones. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Hi to the two of you. I'm so sorry that Cathy is going through such a hard time. I certainly hope she will be okay soon. War time must have been such a strain. The fear of your loved ones. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Hi Ulla! We really appreciate your continued support. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, for your concern about Cathy. We'll find out what happens next in Chapter 14. It's in the works and coming soon. All the best to you, too, and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy