Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 3-5-3 air poem, Summer Interlude, has the right set up and finds that the rain-cleansed air can help u# breathe easier as we watch life absorb the rain.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019

Thanks for read and review.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

This is a wonderful offering for the 'Air' contest...to use your representation of air to be the smelling of the air surrounding a rain shower!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019

Thank you for your read and encouraging comments.

Comment from LyndaS

Excellent

Love the formatting on this contest entry. Great, refreshing art to go along with your 11 syllables. This leaves a refreshing image as you read through this. Well done. Lynda

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019

Thanks much for your read and comments.

Comment from tim dodd

Excellent

I feel the rain in your poem
and the solitude and quietness of it
the rain on flowers is poetry at its
finest
3- 5 - 3
Smell of rain
Thunder then showers
Flowers drink
humans drink too

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019

Perfect line four if it was a 3-5-3-4 challenge. Thanks for your review and comments.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count
and imagery are very good.
-I like your topic and how
you incorporate the sense of
smell and the aspects of
a thunder storm into the poem.
-A very good satori like conclusion.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019

Thanks much for your read and your encouraging comments.

reply by Pam (respa) on 06-Oct-2019

You are welcome.