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Publicity Call.

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Comment from Bill Pinder
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That is an interesting message expressed in a creative way in this short writing. Thanks for sharing this, and it is a very relevant message in today's world. Keep writing.
Bill

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

Comment from NickieT
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I love how effortlessly this poem fits the 5-7-5 form. You have made excellent use of your syllables - creating commentary, telling a story, and leaving the reader feeling satisfied. =)

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019