Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Your entry for the Senryu Yourself contest is sad.
The story and message here are clear, if not happy thoughts.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019

Thank you.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Well, that's pretty awful.... kinda hoping the pic isn't a self-portrait as well... Quite an interesting offering for self-senryu - but we'll go with the hope of a bit of true satire.. ? :) Best of luck at the polls... :)

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019

Thanks, and it is not a self portrait.

reply by Y. M. Roger on 04-Oct-2019

LOL! :) I figured as much... twas but a bit of a joke... :) ;) ;)

reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019

Thanks.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a sad state of affairs and makes one very vulnerable out on the street, and this guy is in a sorry state and could be the target of ridicule, a poignant write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019

Thank you.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Poet has written this Senryu to express what happened with her; she lost confidence but got back her courage just flipping on the screen of the mobile and saved her; well said, well done.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019

Thanks.

Comment from NickieT

Excellent

The humor in this is stellar. I think many of us have been there before - with or without the courage to embrace it as you have. Best of luck with this entry =)

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019

Thanks.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct theme, line and syllable count. Sometimes facing our fears can be hazardous LOL. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019

Thanks.