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Comment from country ranch writer
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This is so cute and adorable how could anyone not love this! Nice work up for this darling poem.loveable as all get out! Cute as a button.I love the poem!

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2019

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This is a delightful read! I must say you're quite well preserved for your age LOL. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019

Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Well I don't dispute for sure, the studies are saying that we become older we behave as children and why not look like ones too? Here you have it:"Yeah...it's me...I'm ninety-three...
Why turn up your lips in disbelieving me?"

"You're just mad at me...cause I'm ninety-three,
And I look younger than you must be."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your looks:)

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019

Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Such a fun and even intriguing offering for the morning, sir -- love the 'lightness' and 'joviality-tease' to this one! :) And if it is your b-day, sir -- Happy Birthday! ;) Thanx for sharing that smile! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your poem, Rhonnie. Your lines flow smoothly with a fun message. Young kids have no grasp of time/years. I like the dialogue included. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019