Autumn Fire
Light sets fire to fall colors.9 total reviews
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Laura
So you are a fellow Canadian! I live on the outskirts of Saint John, New Brunswick. We still have a lot of green, not yielding yet to the cool nights of October. There are a few red leaves, but the peak of Autumn is still a couple of weeks away.
Your area sounds so nice. It made me remember Gordon Lightfoot's song about North Ontario,
https://youtu.be/Ktepoit5B80
I'm a big Lightfoot fan.
I enjoyed your Haiku entry. Is that your lake? What is its name?
So much red! The glory of Autumn has to burn through the fog first, eh?
I find late autumn is gloomy, but there's no prettier time of year than mid-October.
Good Luck in the contest!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Hi Laura
So you are a fellow Canadian! I live on the outskirts of Saint John, New Brunswick. We still have a lot of green, not yielding yet to the cool nights of October. There are a few red leaves, but the peak of Autumn is still a couple of weeks away.
Your area sounds so nice. It made me remember Gordon Lightfoot's song about North Ontario,
https://youtu.be/Ktepoit5B80
I'm a big Lightfoot fan.
I enjoyed your Haiku entry. Is that your lake? What is its name?
So much red! The glory of Autumn has to burn through the fog first, eh?
I find late autumn is gloomy, but there's no prettier time of year than mid-October.
Good Luck in the contest!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your review. Of course, we are fans of Gordon L We are at the peak now and it is just gorgeous. The Lake in our town is called Lake Bernard the largest freshwater lake in the world without an island. The pic was similar but not mine.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
As one who loves autumn--especially the first half--I can say HURRAH
to October and to this fine piece. You have made effective use of all of your syllables.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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As one who loves autumn--especially the first half--I can say HURRAH
to October and to this fine piece. You have made effective use of all of your syllables.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you your review is appreciated!
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a Haiku Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
(Based on Fall Colours)
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective Content and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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This is a Haiku Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
(Based on Fall Colours)
...
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
...
Adjective Content and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Thanks, Ricky for your knowledgeable review, Hope you are doing well
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is a very fitting and beautiful Autumn offering for the haiku contest! ;) I would suggest the removal of all punctuation and capitalization as these limited forms do not need such.... each word is important since there are so few and the line breaks ARE your 'pauses'..... ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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This is a very fitting and beautiful Autumn offering for the haiku contest! ;) I would suggest the removal of all punctuation and capitalization as these limited forms do not need such.... each word is important since there are so few and the line breaks ARE your 'pauses'..... ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your helpful review, much appreciated.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your autumn colors in this picture are spectacular. Your words are very good. I hate to see fall season move on and welcome winter. The year has gone by too fast.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Your autumn colors in this picture are spectacular. Your words are very good. I hate to see fall season move on and welcome winter. The year has gone by too fast.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your lovely well thought out review. I am not looking forward to winter as well. Last year we had so much snow.
Comment from moonsunrise
Thanks for sharing this lovely poem about Autumn. This has to be my favorite time of year. The image with the shadow of the trees reflecting in the water is so vibrant. Early mornings in fall are the best.
Kind regards.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Thanks for sharing this lovely poem about Autumn. This has to be my favorite time of year. The image with the shadow of the trees reflecting in the water is so vibrant. Early mornings in fall are the best.
Kind regards.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Your review is much appreciated!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku about the reds and golds of the autumn trees are a delight we like to see. It is like a fire in the trees when the sun rises and spread light over it all.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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A very well-written haiku about the reds and golds of the autumn trees are a delight we like to see. It is like a fire in the trees when the sun rises and spread light over it all.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review I appreciate it.
Comment from Coco Jane
Neat images. Great picture too--although I don't see any fog. Maybe talk about early morning dew or show or crisp. Then let the light do something positive like displaying the show or God's hues.
I like the "red golds" part.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Neat images. Great picture too--although I don't see any fog. Maybe talk about early morning dew or show or crisp. Then let the light do something positive like displaying the show or God's hues.
I like the "red golds" part.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review I appreciate it.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem is certainly filled with brightness and light. The picture illustrates the words very well. The words are well chosen. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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This poem is certainly filled with brightness and light. The picture illustrates the words very well. The words are well chosen. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your lovely review
