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Homemade Memories

Pralines and love in a family kitchen (see author notes)

27 total reviews 
Comment from zanya
Exceptional
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What an exquisite poem -the rhythm reflecting the theme of the sheer joy and anticipation 'When Christmastime would roll around' and each of the kids doing their share - how different life was then -a sheer joy to read

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
    Oh, Zanya!! Thank you, THANK YOU for these lovely stars and especially for your awesome comments!! They are treasured!!
Comment from NickieT
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Your poem makes my mouth water! As someone who loves to bake, I think that you have all of the right ingredients for a tastefully done poem that does justice to the deliciousness of pralines. The image and color choice really help give this poem a fun and festive feel.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
    Thank you, Nickie, for this awesomely detailed and positive review - so encouraging!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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This is really good. I really like all of the attention to each intricate detail of the process incorporated into this. I consider this entry well thought out and if not a winner, pretty darn close. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
    Thank you, Jeffrey, for this awesomely detailed and positive review - so encouraging!
Comment from Gail Denham
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Nice poem - good illustration of how to make pralines. never heard of Steens - glad you explained what it was. My husband's mom was from the south and boy could she make good candy. Her nut roll was amazing. And divinity. Anyway - enjoyed the poem.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
    Thank you for the wonderful review -- so glad I could conjure some yummy memories for you!
Comment from Ogden
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A poem replete with nostalgia and those mouthwatering southern specialties of your fastidious mother. Now I have to satisfy my suddenly demanding appetite. :)
Don

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
    Thank you for such a positive review, Don -- be sure to add a little sweetness to your snack!!
reply by Ogden on 04-Oct-2019
    You're very welcome.
    (Thank you for the sweetness suggestion!!! (A no-no)
Comment from jenintorre
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This is a fabulous poem written in excellent rhyme. I think you have created a real atmosphere with your words. Love it. Best of luck in the competition. Jen

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
    Thank you for such a positive review, Jen -- so glad you enjoyed!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem/recipe of pralines. I did not try this before but I certainly am going to look into this one, I like to make chocolate fudge with biscuits, it is always a winner here.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
    Thank you for such a positive review, Sandra -- so glad you enjoyed!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Wow these look very naughty and delicious and what a treat to eat these at Christmas or at anytime. I'm glad you mention how you pronounce 'Pralines' because we in England pronounce this word very differently. Great rhymes and a joy to read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
    Thank you for such a positive review, Dolly -- and, oh, they are yummy!!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This is both a childhood memory and a clever poem. I got a kick out of the last line: Mom's New Orleans' Pralines! That is because I immediately saw MNOP, in alphabetical order and smiled. This poem also reminded me of my mother's former favorite ice cream flavor, pralines and cream. Very nicely related in a rhyme scheme that does not seem overwrought.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
    Thank you for such a positive review, Crystie -- glad I could offer you a recall of some sweet memories of your own!!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"Homemade Memories", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
    Thank you for the positive review, Duchess -- always appreciated!
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 05-Oct-2019

    Dear Anon,
    as always, you're very welcome.
    Take care and God bless,
    the Duchess :)))