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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is delightful with all of the alliteration and rhyme packed into these 17 syllables. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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This is delightful with all of the alliteration and rhyme packed into these 17 syllables. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a lovely little poem with an adorable picture to match. I especially like the third line. The words convey that the ballerina is a small child by their lilt rather than saying it directly. Well done.
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This is a lovely little poem with an adorable picture to match. I especially like the third line. The words convey that the ballerina is a small child by their lilt rather than saying it directly. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
