The Fae Nation
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Hercas"Still just a germ of an idea that the moment
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Comment from Adri7enne
Ah, sweet, Bob! Sort of restores my faith in elves. At least they're not out to beat up on a fellow who's a little short in the IQ department. I liked how you ratcheted up the tension and let it calm, then fired it up again. And the fact that his name ended up meaning "Shithead" is pretty neat. Lol! Poor Sweetie. He's like the rest of us - just wants to fit in somewhere. Much more optimistic, Bob. Loved it. All out of 6's. Catch you next time.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Ah, sweet, Bob! Sort of restores my faith in elves. At least they're not out to beat up on a fellow who's a little short in the IQ department. I liked how you ratcheted up the tension and let it calm, then fired it up again. And the fact that his name ended up meaning "Shithead" is pretty neat. Lol! Poor Sweetie. He's like the rest of us - just wants to fit in somewhere. Much more optimistic, Bob. Loved it. All out of 6's. Catch you next time.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thanks. Glad you liked the slight shift in atmosphere
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
when the licence had to be renewed (license)
Listen, this document. It's written in high elf." (Listen, this document, it's written in high elf."
If we leave some of it there(,) it acts as an anchor
This is a wonderful chapter and quite entertaining to read, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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when the licence had to be renewed (license)
Listen, this document. It's written in high elf." (Listen, this document, it's written in high elf."
If we leave some of it there(,) it acts as an anchor
This is a wonderful chapter and quite entertaining to read, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 01-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your review. Licence is the correct spelling in London, but I'll look at the other spags. Thanks again. Glad you liked it