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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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I don't know.... I think maybe that tower there in the upper middle might be a bit of a giveaway... LOL! :) ;) Still, I love the sentiment that it's all the same from 10,000 feet! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck ! ;) :) Yvette

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
    Thanks, Yvette. That could be an oil derrick. :)
reply by Y. M. Roger on 02-Oct-2019
    LOL -- think those parisian-types would have burned that down by now....!! :) :) ;)
Comment from nomi338
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It is for certain, I cannot tell the difference. I would imagine that with the use of some modern technology, it would no doubt be possible to differentiate between the the three places. I could not do it even from ground level as I do not read or speak French.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
    Merci, nomi.
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Bill

I have flown over Paris several times but not those other French cities, but from the air they all may look the same. LOL

THANKS for your aerial view (-;

Mark

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
    I can see the Eiffel Tower in this picture, but it might be an oil derrick.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count. The content is clever and pretty interesting as I didn't know that the aerial views of all three cities was so similar. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
    Thank you, MA
Comment from Sallyo
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Thus, France is France is France? That is a truly enigmatic poem and I spent a while trying to decipher it. Not to worry; I like pieces that give me something to decipher.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
    Thank you, Sallyo
Comment from lyenochka
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Really? I never saw any of those cities and definitely not from the air. So I'm not sure if that's true. But I heard that there are things called arrondissements that spiral around Paris which should make it look unique.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
    I guess the point is that wherever you land you?re in France.