If You Could See
Contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Kathleen S.
A beautiful poem and speaks of innocence and beauty and aging hearts and desires that call out to whoever it is written too. Very well done. The pictures goes along well with it.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
A beautiful poem and speaks of innocence and beauty and aging hearts and desires that call out to whoever it is written too. Very well done. The pictures goes along well with it.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Thank you! Love poems are my favorite! Thank you for reading! xoxo
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a beautifully penned poem, my friend. The repetition in the first line and the modified repetition in the second line are very effective. A delightful read~Debbie
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
This is a beautifully penned poem, my friend. The repetition in the first line and the modified repetition in the second line are very effective. A delightful read~Debbie
Comment Written 30-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much! I appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
A touching, sweet love poem. Who could resist if this poem were meant for them? Well crafted and flowed well. Nice read! Love poems as such are seldom crafted anymore!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
A touching, sweet love poem. Who could resist if this poem were meant for them? Well crafted and flowed well. Nice read! Love poems as such are seldom crafted anymore!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much! Love poems are my ultimate favorite to write! I appreciate you enjoyed and that you honored it with a six!!! xoxo
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