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Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "As Autumn Arrives "Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez
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Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed your pleasant reflection on the season of Autumn. It seems to rhyme quite regularly in an aabb rhyme scheme so technically, it isn't "free verse." However, you gave us lovely imagery and a reminder of that colorful transition from summer and the peaceful time before the holidays.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Enjoyed your pleasant reflection on the season of Autumn. It seems to rhyme quite regularly in an aabb rhyme scheme so technically, it isn't "free verse." However, you gave us lovely imagery and a reminder of that colorful transition from summer and the peaceful time before the holidays.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing this submission, I'm Always endeavoring to improve with Everyone's valued review.
Comment from Cheryl I
This is a nice poem about all the changes, in addition to the colors, that come with fall. Nice graphic to complement your poem. I hope you enjoy the rest of the season!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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This is a nice poem about all the changes, in addition to the colors, that come with fall. Nice graphic to complement your poem. I hope you enjoy the rest of the season!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments. Photo Credit goes to Free Verse Club monthly writing event for last month. Blessings.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Revealing spooky finger tipped branches reaching out over a leaf covered ground. (I love this line)
yellows, reds,and Brown's, (lower case 'b')
made it's rounds! (its)
The Sun still shines as seen behind this tree's wind twisted branches,
As fall continues aging dark green leaves get lighter as if it blanches! This is two complete sentences so the comma should be a period or semi-colon)
With plenty of Autumn days left to make up with those whom we may solve some type of dissent! (this sentence seems a bit awkward to me)
It's just one thing colorful Autumn seasonal changes may come to represent? Use a period as this is not a question)
There is much lovely imagery in this beautiful poem, my friend. I enjoyed it very much~Debbie
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Revealing spooky finger tipped branches reaching out over a leaf covered ground. (I love this line)
yellows, reds,and Brown's, (lower case 'b')
made it's rounds! (its)
The Sun still shines as seen behind this tree's wind twisted branches,
As fall continues aging dark green leaves get lighter as if it blanches! This is two complete sentences so the comma should be a period or semi-colon)
With plenty of Autumn days left to make up with those whom we may solve some type of dissent! (this sentence seems a bit awkward to me)
It's just one thing colorful Autumn seasonal changes may come to represent? Use a period as this is not a question)
There is much lovely imagery in this beautiful poem, my friend. I enjoyed it very much~Debbie
Comment Written 30-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the review and positive encouragement. Your valued corrections will be incorporated along with masking the font smaller. Blessings.