What Breaks My Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Darkness"Poems and stories tellin' it like I see it.
5 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
This is outstanding and you know I am not one to waste a compliment. I've read a lot of loop poetry this week, and yours is the winner in my eyes. It flows so nicely and tells the complete story of your loss. I can feel it in every line. I've been married a long time and can't imagine my life without my precious Jackson. I send along my condolences and extra hugs. Please accept my six stars for your fine accomplishment.
My best to you as always and in the loop poetry contest,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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This is outstanding and you know I am not one to waste a compliment. I've read a lot of loop poetry this week, and yours is the winner in my eyes. It flows so nicely and tells the complete story of your loss. I can feel it in every line. I've been married a long time and can't imagine my life without my precious Jackson. I send along my condolences and extra hugs. Please accept my six stars for your fine accomplishment.
My best to you as always and in the loop poetry contest,
Sally xo
Comment Written 30-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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I am truly humbled! I deeply appreciate the review and comments!
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You are most welcome. XO
Comment from scongrove
Love this one! The artwork is perfect as well. Your emotions are well described and I could feel them as I read along. You have a talented way of bringing your feelings to life with words. Fantastic writing my friend!
This is a winner for me!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Love this one! The artwork is perfect as well. Your emotions are well described and I could feel them as I read along. You have a talented way of bringing your feelings to life with words. Fantastic writing my friend!
This is a winner for me!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the review , the comments, and of course, the six stars!
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You're so welcome! :)
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a well done loop poem, my friend. You got the rhyme scheme right. Quite a few seem to have missed that part. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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This is a well done loop poem, my friend. You got the rhyme scheme right. Quite a few seem to have missed that part. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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I thank you for the review, comments and wishes for luck. I tried to make sure I followed the form correctly.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Friend!
I love the rhythm and mood your Loop Poem creates. I also appreciate that your offering begins and ends with the same word. That is how I have always understood Loop Poems to be structured, but I do realize there are variations!
Very moving!
Best wishes!
Diane
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Hello Friend!
I love the rhythm and mood your Loop Poem creates. I also appreciate that your offering begins and ends with the same word. That is how I have always understood Loop Poems to be structured, but I do realize there are variations!
Very moving!
Best wishes!
Diane
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Diane, my friend, for the review, comments and best wishes. Also again, for the six stars.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a "Loop Poetry Contest Entry."
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
Adjective Content and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor 1024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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This is a "Loop Poetry Contest Entry."
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
Adjective Content and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor 1024
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Thank you ever so much. I really appreciate the review, the comments you made, and the good luck wish!