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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Oh Fly for Me, Sidney?"Children Stories from the Heart.
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Indeed! We have to keep steadfast in our trust that our prayers will be answered - they always are just not always in the way we had wished for but God knows what s best for each of us. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Indeed! We have to keep steadfast in our trust that our prayers will be answered - they always are just not always in the way we had wished for but God knows what s best for each of us. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Thanks for liking!
Ricky
Comment from Lulube
just have faith, for some an easy quest, for others, not a foreseeable opportunity, for there is too much doubt. great little story.
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
lulube
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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just have faith, for some an easy quest, for others, not a foreseeable opportunity, for there is too much doubt. great little story.
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
lulube
Comment Written 30-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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All right one for you my dear.
Ricky
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so I'm in the game eh? lol
lulube
Comment from Gert sherwood
HELLO rickY
it was fun reading your post. Why I liked how you so cleverly told the names of the poets and story tells the names of of the writers and the title of their work on
fanstory.
Gert
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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HELLO rickY
it was fun reading your post. Why I liked how you so cleverly told the names of the poets and story tells the names of of the writers and the title of their work on
fanstory.
Gert
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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I always bring the Fanstory friend into these.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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You are welcome Ricky1024
I agree it's a nice way to mention one's name.
Gert
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
"Thank you Annie ad I share with you... (did you mean and instead of ad?
Someone her wants 5o mert you and his name is John.' I don't understand this at all.
"But not a nibble not bite?" ( Not a nibble, not a bite)
An interesting story, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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"Thank you Annie ad I share with you... (did you mean and instead of ad?
Someone her wants 5o mert you and his name is John.' I don't understand this at all.
"But not a nibble not bite?" ( Not a nibble, not a bite)
An interesting story, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Thanks Debbie.
I found no Grammar issues.
I was writing it in church.
Ricky
Comment from Alex Rosel
Hi Doctor Ricky1024,
I liked this a lot, and I love the narrator's guise as Annie Oakley {smiles}.
Just a couple of points you might like to consider:
The King flea of Spain... -- Excellent {smiles}.
Just stay to the left and have s[?] Blessed day. -- Spag? Do you mean "a Blessed day"?
All the best,
Alex.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Hi Doctor Ricky1024,
I liked this a lot, and I love the narrator's guise as Annie Oakley {smiles}.
Just a couple of points you might like to consider:
The King flea of Spain... -- Excellent {smiles}.
Just stay to the left and have s[?] Blessed day. -- Spag? Do you mean "a Blessed day"?
All the best,
Alex.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
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Thanks Alex.
This was written during church.
Many errors.
Doctor Ricky 1024